Jennyflower81
Nov 7, 2011
Undergraduate / 'As a young Asian American' world you come from and how it shaped the person you are [2]
As I grew, I did not become the traditional by-product of who my parents were intending to create through their traditional parenting. ...I did not become the by-product of this traditional upbringing, as my parents had intended.
Even though I have not become the person my parents intended to create You are repeating yourself here.
My unwillingness became resent toward my parents and it lead to an aggregated decline in school performance. My unwillingness to study and overachieve led to resentment toward my parents...
Thomas, how did you change so much. You were such a modeled student." ...change so much? You were such a model student.
Outside of classrooms, I began to surround myself with friends who were bad influences. Outside of the classroom, I became surrounded with friends who were a bad influence.
I had never thought of the future for myself. You could say: I had never imagined what my future would be like.
I was being selfish to myself and I knew I had to change. remove "to myself"
I like your story, it is inspiring and shows how important a parent's role is in education for their child.
As I grew, I did not become the traditional by-product of who my parents were intending to create through their traditional parenting. ...I did not become the by-product of this traditional upbringing, as my parents had intended.
Even though I have not become the person my parents intended to create You are repeating yourself here.
My unwillingness became resent toward my parents and it lead to an aggregated decline in school performance. My unwillingness to study and overachieve led to resentment toward my parents...
Thomas, how did you change so much. You were such a modeled student." ...change so much? You were such a model student.
Outside of classrooms, I began to surround myself with friends who were bad influences. Outside of the classroom, I became surrounded with friends who were a bad influence.
I had never thought of the future for myself. You could say: I had never imagined what my future would be like.
I was being selfish to myself and I knew I had to change. remove "to myself"
I like your story, it is inspiring and shows how important a parent's role is in education for their child.