Writing Feedback / Communication through technology should replace all other forms of communication..... [3]

"Communication through technology should replace all other forms of communication in contemporary society."

When certain information gets transferred from one individual to another or from one source to another, that is called as "Communication". Communication could be through any media like letter of correspondence or by a messenger, by telephoning, by email at individual levels or if it addresses to a big forum it could be through news paper, TV Channel or Radio etc to name a few. With the advancement of technology and fast moving modern society there is definitely a need of fast communication and so in modern era communication through technology plays a vital role. I do agree that communication through technology should replace all other manual way of communication going forward.

Before concluding my remarks let us discuss few examples and examine both pros and cons side of having technology as the only option for communication. In our history we have studied at some point of time pigeon was being trained as a messenger to pass information in the form of letter from one king to another and then it is followed by a faithful person to be responsible for communication, which was substituted by letter by post as an attempt to communicate more reliably and under supervision of postal employees. These mode communication are definitely time taking and hence in an attempt to make the communication little faster in case of emergency situation telegram with just few words subjecting the matter came into picture and now through fax machine a big letter or a documents can be sent within few minutes from one place to another.

Telephone is another way of communication which is faster than sending letters. Now mobile technology is the buzz word in the field of communication and it is wide spread being the fastest way to get in touch with anyone. A person from one part of world can reach with his family, friends or office colleagues and so physical separation does not play a major role in today''s world. People have started believing in living in virtual world and accepting whole earth as single Global village where a person being any corner of the world can be reachable. Similarly with the evolution of internet in Information technology, email communication is widely used technology among all generations, because of it's fast response easy to use. There are no hassles of covering in a post card and drop it somewhere or send it through courier. With advance of technology and by the use of satellite communication, it is easy to keep track the happenings in another country and world as a whole. So I believe communication through technology has a major role towards globalization, open business and work opportunities across countries in the globe and hence in making whole world irrespective of countries, religion and race as a truly global village.

At the end I would like to say I would be the strong supporter to make communication through technology as the only means and should replace all the other forms of communications which is obsolete in the present society. For a better future we need to go hand in hand with technology.

Writing Feedback / GRE: A multi-national corporation should require employees to learn languages [3]

"A multi-national corporation should require all of its employees to learn several languages in order to advance within the corporation."

A multi-national corporation spreads across different countries to enlarge its customer domain and hence expand its business. Due to its presence in multiple countries and continents, the employees in a multi-national corporation are of different race, religion, language and citizens with different mindsets influenced with native country's culture and geography. So to say an American citizen employee thinking style is certainly different from its counterpart from China or India. However in workplace that certainly does not matter, as irrespective of countries or language for an employee to grow in an organization language does not play any role, as currently English is the universally accepted office language in the world.

By imposing to learn many languages to each and every employee of an MNC, we are surely putting a restriction. Today all the developed countries and most of the developing nation in world have taken English as their official language and encouraging English to be taught in the school from the primary level onwards so that future generation of the country will be well versed in English language. Language is no more a barrier for the growth of a person in an organization in 21st century. It could be a positive factor if a person working in an multinational corporation has command on many languages, so that if at all he or she gets transferred to a foreign land whose local languages are known to her/him, She/He will have less difficulty in settling down, but language is a small factor , English being popular worldwide. But to grow within an organization knowing several languages is not at all a major reason. Often we have seen delegates of different countries when they meet, if someone does not have good command on English speaking, Interpreters are introduced to smooth the conversations.

At the end I would like to say that, if a multi-national company starts giving training to all its employees on different languages the main goal will be diluted and skilled employee will be certainly demoralized. However multinational company can offer multi cultural training to make its employee aware of cultures of different countries, so that when they work with their counterparts from a different land there will not be much cultural shock.

Writing Feedback / GRE Issue - the word thinking is tightly coupled with the word originality, which cannot be detached [8]

Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways."

Originality means Creativity, Out of Box Thinking, bringing new ideas and inventions, thinking from a different angle which was never thought before. I completely disagree with the definition of Originality i.e." putting old ideas in new ways". How will you find new ways of putting old ideas without discovering something completely new than the existing one?

I will cite few examples to prove my opinion.

The dictionary meaning of the word Originality says the quality or state of being original, freshness of new ideas, style or design, and the power of independent thinking or constructive imagination. An invention or style which is completely new and startled many people. So the word thinking is tightly coupled with the word originality, which cannot be detached. Let us take a look on few examples which clearly demonstrates this phenomenon.

The changes we see today or our history says are continuous and never ending and because of this now we are leading a much better life than our ancestors. In the course of time many great inventors, Scientist, artists have taken a walk in this earth. These extraordinary people with their power of imagination discovered wonderful facts of nature or something new which had never exists. Since ages people were seeing apple falling from the tree, but it had never bothered anyone to find out what is making it to fall. However Sir Isaac Newton could not stop thinking to find out the root cause of an object falling into the ground and hence force of gravity taken birth and opened path for many more important discoveries in future. Similarly it was James Watson's extraordinary thinking ability had harnessed the power of steam and discovery of steam power engine taken place or discovery of Electric bulb by Thomas Alva Edison was beautiful example of originality. Behind all these inventions and discoveries there lies an extraordinary imagination. It will be injustice to say that all these inventions are nothing new but just an extension of old ideas presented in a new way. To support this let's take the example of smart phone. When Apple invented iphone for the first time it had surprised everyone in this globe by its incredible features in such a small device because of altogether new touch and feel. Is it not something original? Can we just claim that it is just an extension of Graham Bell invention of Telephone? However the same ideas when other companies like Nokia, Samsaung, HTC etc had copied and brought their own product into the market that lacked the originality.

Writing Feedback / Important truths are outrageous when they begin; GRE ISSUE TOPIC [4]

Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time."
This is a very important topic of religion vs. Science should be taken forward for discussion before coming to a concluding remark. I believe this statement is little bit biased towards ancient time philosophy where religion used to play an important role in all societies. There were certain norms and beliefs in each religion and common people used to have blind faith in it and each religion head e.g. Pope in Church or Priest in Temples had tremendous influence on civilian, so the words taught by them or mentioned in religious books used to be the accepted truth or wisdom at that point of time. So the ancient society was quite conservative and hence unwilling to adapt new thinking or inventions. However in modern days, people are more open minded, educated and possess high thinking power unlike their predecessor. In today's world most of the countries are democratic and hence people have got more rights and privilege to speak openly. Time has changed now and it is science which has played a major role at this time. People are more curious and inquisitive to learn new things and hence to adapt new inventions. Discoveries by great scientists are always given importance and for further research Government of developed countries are ready to invest on grooming those ideas in search of important truths.

If we look into world history, there are instances, where discoveries or important truths discovered by great scientist were abandoned simply and they were disowned by the society or gone through severe punishment. A very good example could be theory of Copernicus, who had contradicted the common people belief that Earth is at the Center and Sun along with other planets revolves around it by saying Sun is motionless and lies at the Center and earth along with other planets revolves around it. This was not at all accepted and was considered as hypothesis forever until Galileo came to the same conclusion and supported the truth invented by Copernicus. Galileo was harassed, criticised by the people, forced to deny his given statements in public. But certainly with time people have realised the truths and so we are now at this modern leading technology era. With time Science has overruled the religious sentiments of the people and people are more receptive towards the important truths. One great example could be Big Bang theory by Edwin Hubble in 1929, who has mentioned about the formation of Universe by saying that our Universe does have starting point, which started as a infinitely hot, dense and tiny called Singularity around 13.7 billion years ago. After it's initial appearance, than slowly it got expanded, cooled going from very small , hot to the size of temperature of today's universe. Similarly Scientist believes on extraterrestrial planet life and doing serious research to unveil the actual truths. Space Scientist are more enthusiast to study about other planets and their nature. Scientist have landed in moon, space and definitely a day will come they will successfully venture into other planets and many more truths will be unfolded going forward and it will be accepted if proven without much criticism.

Now the world has changed and so the people's mindset and with time as theory evolution has mentioned the modern age people certainly possess more thinking power than their ancestors. Gone are those days where people used to have blind faiths and fear to accept the truth. In these advanced days people are so well connected with each other, open minded and ready to share knowledge across globe. Developed countries like USA, UK spends millions of dollars on developing patents and on research. So at the end I would like to say that important truths or discoveries with serious evidences are seriously taken by the people and accepted by the people, certainly conscience and thinking has played measure roles than sentiments and rigidness.

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