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Posts by iniguezk
Joined: Aug 27, 2011
Last Post: Aug 28, 2011
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Aug 28, 2011
Undergraduate / "understand how my head works" - Boston Supplement [3]

Corrections and Tips are appreciated!

Question: It is three weeks before the start of your freshman year at BU, and you are talking to your new roommate for the first time. Since you are trying to get to know each other, what are a few things you would want to share about who you are?

Answer:
Whenever i meet someone new,whom i know i shall be spending a long time with, i want to make sure he becomes insightful with whom i am wether i be a disappointment to them or not. Some things i would like to share would be about whom i am, where i come from, and express the values of my life. I'd explain to my roommate how i came from nothing, and turned my life into something. As a child, i wasn't the happiest camper around the block. My family struggled throughout my toddler years, but eventually found a solution to our problems. My mother became successful by working for an accountant firm which later led her to hold the title of Vice President. Before you know it, my family was living in one of the most affluent towns in the state of Massachusetts, but let me assure that i do not ever flaunt of this. My mother showed me that when failure knocks you down, you get back up and give success another try.Growing up in urban New York, I witnessed failure and made a promise to myself that i would always become someone successful. At this point i believe my roommate would understand how my head works. He'd understand how great opportunities lead to success.
iniguezk   
Aug 28, 2011
Undergraduate / "Moving from New York City, I had trouble" - Boston University Supplement [4]

Any help or revisions would be aprreciated!

Essay 1

Question: In a few sentences, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission?

Answer:Moving from New York City, I had trouble adjusting to west suburban Massachusetts and thought the last three years of my high school career were going to be absolutely dreadful. This was until I discovered my true purpose for moving to Massachusetts. My purpose for moving to Massachusetts was to discover Boston University.I recently took my first tour of Boston University just a few months ago and immediately knew; there couldn't be a better college for me. Not only did it impress me with its beautiful building and classrooms, but also as the education being offered. A very close friend of mine, whom is currently attending Boston University, granted me with the privilege of a personal tour of the campus as well as to view a cultivation of her old freshman coursework, I immediately fell in love with topics being discussed and how students were taught to adapt to Boston University's environment. Being a minority, I felt like if I was right at home throughout my personal tour for how well diversity plays into Boston University. By attending Boston University, I believe I will truly be prepared for what fate has in stock for me.
iniguezk   
Aug 27, 2011
Undergraduate / "to become a successful accountant" - Bentley Supplement [5]

Question: Please discuss your interest in Bentley and the aspects of our community that will help you reach your academic and personal goals.

Corrections and Tips would be great!

Answer:My main reason in wanting attending Bentley University is to become a successful accountant. Ever since i could remember, i witnessed my mother enter the field of accountanty from start to present . Her journey has truly become an inspiration for me in which i believe i can achieve one day. I was privileged enough to have an interesting conversation with one of my mothers closest friend, in which he spoke about how much the educational environment at Bentley impacted on his life. I wish to only participate in this environment in which Bentley University will truly provide.By attending Bentley University, i believe i will understand the true meaning of what it means to be an accountant. Since Bentley University is solemnly considered for educational factors in business, i believe it is safe to say Bentley is for me.
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