Kielbasy
Dec 30, 2011
Undergraduate / 'The Perks of Being Literate and Self-Honesty' - PERSONAL ESSAY [13]
Change "struggle" in the third paragraph to "struggled" to maintain parallel sentence structure. Besides that, your essay is great! The topic behind it is very personal - it'll give colleges an idea of who you are and how you've developed as a human being.
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Check out mine, if you would, pretty please:
Change "struggle" in the third paragraph to "struggled" to maintain parallel sentence structure. Besides that, your essay is great! The topic behind it is very personal - it'll give colleges an idea of who you are and how you've developed as a human being.
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Check out mine, if you would, pretty please: