Writing Feedback / Tv advertising is not good, agree or dis agree (IELTS) [7]

TV advertising is playing pivotal role in marketing sector. Many using this mode of marketing to advertise their products to target peoples. Television advertising is growing popular. Cause, it is convenient to transmit message to thousands of peoples through television channel. Though many people perceive that TV advertising is not good, but I prefer that it is much more effective way of conveying message to people.

Firstly, Through TV commercial a company who is going to market his product can easily grab attention of people. For example, in a recent survey made by Dhaka university says that, people seems that TV commercial is more useful and popular mode, rather than other advertising media. On that survey there were 2000 participants, among them around 1500 voted for television commercial. Now-a -days whether it is urban or rural life in every house there must have a television. So we conveniently assume that television advertising has good impact on us.

Secondly, Television advertises reduces the advertising expenses. For example, a company who promote his product through TV channel do not need any other mode of advertisement. Possibly it helps that company to reduce the advertisement cost subsequently. Generally, a company has to expend huge money to broadcast a 30 seconds video. But it easily draws attention of millions of people. There could be higher cost involved to grab attention of millions people if companies do not advertise through television.

In conclusion, Despite all contradiction I firmly agree that television advertisement makes the way easier to broadcast numerous product more easily and conveniently.

Writing Feedback / Paying tax is favorable for state, Agree or Disagree? {IELTS} [2]

According to democracy, people is the center of all power. A state cannot prosper without help of its citizen. And a state runs his government from people tax. Tax is the prime source of income of a state. Many argue that paying tax brings prosperity but some of them have unwillingness to pay tax. As a citizen I believe in paying tax.

Firstly On the way to flourish state economy tax is essential. Many States adorn more money in country's developing projects rather than other sectors. For instance, In Bangladesh authority determines 16% government expenditure during 2013-2014 fiscal year would expend on developing sectors. Such as: Building mighty Padma river, generate more electricity from numerous power grid. Therefore to roll up wheel of development it is necessary to pay tax duly.

Secondly, state has lots of obligation to his citizens. He is bound to his people. It is duty of a state to provide proper sanitation, free education up to certain stage, medical treatment etc. State requires enough circulation of capital to meet up his expenses. For example, Here in Bangladesh 70% of forecasted budget expenses for next fiscal year would bear from revenue earn through taxes.

In Conclusion, I contend that paying tax on due time is fruitful for a society and for a country. If we pay tax on due time; in return, we should receive enormous facility from government. Therefore, we should have active participation to build a developed and auspicious country.

Writing Feedback / "Boarding school is beneficial for student". Illustrate your point of view. [8]

Student who reside in school premises under supervision of school teacher's are usually consider as boarding school. Here student stay away from their family members and relatives. Few people tells that it is beneficial for student and some have opposite view of it. Though this is a debatable issue and it has similar pros and cons for students. But i contend that boarding school is rational for student life since it brings lots of opportunity.

Firstly, A student got self dependence who live in boarding school. From early age he used to do his own work by himself. A student learns how to take decision in different circumstance. For example: In boarding school a student falls in numerous difficult situation where he can pull him up only by himself. He should have achieve that capability to overcome those situation. Those who live with their family most of the time they do not do their own work without other help like: washing own cloths, wrap up own sleeping bed. These unique characteristics makes a student more viable.

Secondly, Student becomes more social person while he lives in boarding school compare to those who stay at their home. Ordinarily, boarding school students need to collaborate with different types of person from diverse ages group. Which build him as a social person. For Instance, In school hostel a student have to share his room with others, which teach him to grow up with sharing mentality. He earns the ability to communicate with other student independently without any hesitation.

At last, we stretch out that boarding school prepare a social,self dependent and inquisitive person to survive in this challenging world.