Writing Feedback / Prehistoric village of Palea, evidences. GRE Argument topic 1 [6]

The immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.

Human civilization has been embellished with its rich history. Further, our archaeological surveys has been spotting lights on crucial developments that has been carried our civilization upto this stage since ages. In this context such a finding has been described through archaeological survey .

The issue starts with the survey that has been carried out at prehistoric village of Palea. The artifacts such as Palean baskets are found from that place, which is believed to be the avenue to cross the river.On the contrary, the Brim river, which is very deep, broad, and it is quiet conspicuous that boat is extremely essential to cross it. However, no Palean boats have been found on the investigation. So,the baskets befuddled investigators about its relation with Palean age.

Earlier civilizations were generally used to establish their habitat on the banks of river. Many great civilizations has been sustaining since ages. Thus, it is quiet evident that Palean Civilization might have sustained near the bank of river Brim. As the river is main source for their cultivation, food, and necessities. This might have inspired archaeologist to put across their investigation on this spot. Moreover, the early excavation also brought forth with some apparent artifacts of that age. These findings has again ignited the inquisitiveness of furthering the exploration.

The point of concern in this is that , whether the baskets are belong to the prehistoric Palean Village? or these are mere things of no importance. The fuzziness raised when it seems that Brim river is quiet broad and deep and basket are not the media to cross it. As no boats are also discovered from this site, this further strengthen the clue that the basket may not have any relevance to this investigation. However, during prehistoric ages people used to use bamboos to make flat canopy to cross the river. Further, the baskets may be used for their household works such as keeping grains, clothes, vegetables etc.

Present development of technology may also help further to date the approximate age of basket. In this way the doubt may be neglect. Refuting the evidence with intuition may hamper to decipher clues which might provide us further substantial information. Carbon dating is a useful process in this regard. Further, it is quiet imperative that, basket is a very useful and early developed equipment and hence it presence shows the quiet handy evidence of the footprint of Palean Civilization. There is also ample possibility that, at that time people might have used other crude media to cross the river.

In conclusion, I believe that, the basket should be dated with scientific methodology before refuting it as a footprint of that era. Further, during prehistoric ages people used to take many other media such as flat bamboo canopy, and logs of banana trees to cross the rivers. These are also biodegradable and hence investigators are not finding its clue of it.

Writing Feedback / Essay on attraction of traditional style of developing countries [2]

The traditional lifestyle of developing countries has been attracting an increasing number of tourists. As a side-effect this has been preventing the people in developing countries from adopting modern ways of living. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and examples from personal experience.

Developing countries such as India, China, and Brazil are rich with traditional heritage. Their culture and traditions are of thousand years old, and amalgamation of various cultures from ages among them. Owing to this fact, these destinations are stationed with many good tourist spots which are attracting tourists from various nations over the years. Moreover, by increasing in number of tourists the government of tourism not only earning heftily, but also producing employment. Further, these also induces globalization in that country. Hence, I believe that it has been helping people of these countries to enhance modern way of living.

Firstly,due to this practice in developing nations, many people are earning their daily bread by selling many kind of objects. Further, it helps government to earn revenue to restore and manage these tourist spots. For instance, the great wall of china is one of the wonder of world, and a great tourist spot. People from many countries visit this spot. This help Chinese government not only in earn revenue, but also in restoring the remnants which had been getting fallen over the years. In this way this auspicious monuments are getting preserved. Several many spots can be observed across India also.

Secondly, increase in population of tourist in these spots also changing the life style of the surround population. of course, tourists come from several part of world with different life styles, who are not accustom with the life style of the residents.For this reason, the residents are adopting some of their life style so that it can create a symbiotic ambiance.Therefore the residents are not adhere to their early life style and changing their life style with modern changes within their society.Thus over the period these life style factor also effecting their style in a modern way.

Finally, by increase in the population of tourists not only the government are getting benefit, but also the surrounding demography also updating their way of life. In this way a mutually productive environment is established across these developing countries. Furthermore, the life style of residents are changing with the modern changes to make their life more suitable.

Writing Feedback / Fall of birthrate and increase in the age of person 65 and over by 2030 [NEW]

The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects on these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?

Recent awareness on the population growth has shifted the notion of the people of many countries. Mainly, large democracies such as India, China, are facing many social and technical issues in this regard. This led government of these countries to curb the growth of population. However, it has been observed that, over next 50 years the birth rate will begin to fall. Further, It has been noticed that, by 2030 the most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. This may produce significant adverse affect in population dynamics of countries. Hence, I believe measure should be taken to balance the population dynamics, so that a heterogeneity can be maintained.

Increase of population over 65 age will decline economical and social growth of the countries .It is a well known fact that young people are always the future of the nation, and play significant role for growth of a country. This is the reason developed countries like UK,USA, Australia are investing money on education and research to hone the skill and intellectual capacity of young minds (20-45 age group). However, by 2030 an increase of people over 65 age may form a community of people who might have invigorated to contribute significantly in research and dynamic growth of the country.

By the increase of population over 65 age, countries have to invest more on pension, health care and security require for this aged people. This may increase the expenditure of nation, and divert them from many critical issues like research and development in the field of agriculture, infrastructure. Again these people cant enhance their education level, thus nation may have to devoid of intellectual people require at the spur of moment.

In my opinion, government has to adopt policies such that population should be curbed in such a way that, it would produce heterogeneity among age group. This may balance our society and economy can be maintained. For instance, government should think of plans not for few decades but for a century. Moreover, policies should be conceptualized by taking both statistics and dynamics of demography. Finally, it would be a better option to adopt policies to maintain variations in age, so that they can be able to keep a dynamic age group who can contribute significantly for creation of a bright and prosperous future ahead.

Writing Feedback / benefit to unpaid teenager and local community [6]

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to do help the local community. They believe this would benefit both individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

We belong to the society whose well being depends on our shoulder. Mainly,local community is the place, where we may find complex issues. Moreover, we needs people with thrust to delve within it with devotion to solve some of it. Teenagers in this case are more suitable by keeping all responsibilities in views. Moreover, teenagers are also future of every nations ,and their, effort in any manner may help us to maintain the balance in the social dynamics of our society.

It has been observed that, the local community is a place where many kind of people live within. Mainly, they deal with critical problems such as education, interface with technology, sanitation, healthcare,etc. Furthermore, although government has been putting a lot of effort to eradicate these issues by providing schools, water supply through conduits, hospitals through schemes such as Grampanchyat Yojana in India for several decades. However, issues are getting solved due to unawareness of the residents. Hence, through the teenagers the awareness can be developed, and further they may also enhance it by providing some of the facility according to their suitability. For instance, they can teach children in schools, aware the people regarding sanitation and pollution on garbage disposal and disease related to its accumulation. The awareness on health care by demonstrating the need of the hour facilities.In this way, teenages may enhance their insight towards social issues and lead them to integrate themselves for the reformations in social dynamics of local communities. These days many NGOs are also quiet active in these areas, hence their effort may be further endorsed by these groups. Again, residents of the community will also get substantial benefit out of it.

Finally, teenagers are the most active portion of the society with the energy and intellect to reform our future. Thus, their small step in this way could be a giant step towards the balance of our society.They should think towards learning to solve the issues involve in our society at this stage by working unpaid even. Because it is mutually helpful for them and society as a whole to make it more better and smarter.