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'Considered quitting' - Tufts short answer and essay [18]
Thank you Candaaceee and procrastination for the comments...I really started to hate my essay:( but I have no time rewriting them...I'm so stressed but here's another revised version...
Required short answers(50words)Which aspects of Tufts' curriculum or undergraduate experience prompt your application? In short: "Why Tufts?"
Tufts' internship offers through Experimental College will not only give valuable lessons that I cannot learn through textbooks but also give an opportunity to glimpse the real world. The people who have walked different paths than mine will give insights understanding people to help me prepare for my future career.
Self-identity and personal expression take many forms. Use the richness of your life to give us insight: Who are you? (200words)I met my best friend when I was twelve. We spent a lot of time together. However, as time went by, my friend began to outgrow me. She said that she hated my fingers because they were pudgy and short. I was petrified. Nevertheless, my love for dear friend outweighed the disappointment that I felt.
I could not elongate my fingers, but I tried my best for my friend to like me. One day, too preoccupied to suit my friend's appetite, I did not realize that there were blisters on my fingers. Although physically in pain, I continued. And, my efforts finally paid off; I was playing most of musical scores easily on my flute.
I am a hard worker. However, there are times that I just want to give up by making excuses such as my short fingers are not apt to hold flute properly or my flat feet are unsuitable for me to run well for the school sports. However I try regardless of those handicaps because I do not want to regret in the future that I have not tried my best. I want to live my life with full passion because those efforts integrate my identity.
I would really appreciate if you guys could make comments on these too
I don't think your comments are harsh because my essay really suck;;;;
thank you in advance!