Writing Feedback / IELTS; Try new things or repeat things we know? [6]

Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try. New things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and example to support your choice

People have different attitude and understanding.. Some people like to do what he have it or continue living on that, but some other people are like to do some new thing or try to more advantage or benefit in their life without concern for risk. As for me I m prefers to do what I have and no like to try new thing as no take risk ether.

According to the people like to do only what they already do well. These kinds of people have more comfortable and suitable job him or her. They have not take risk and no tension for failing the business or huge lost the profit. They want safe or simple life and no more popular or surprise to other. Also may be they have no budget to trying new things. For example like teacher. Very simple and not risks for life

But some are very brave to take risks to prefer for new things. They are very confident and intelligent. No need to concern to their future life and try to get more benefit or profit in life. For example some of business man is very greedy to get profit. First time they are selling very simple and then increase the quality of goods. After year ago they try to selling the illegal goods. Because they have get double profit then the simple goods, but I don't think that the entire risks job are not illegal or bad. also some people want to do some more surprise or popular in their life.

In my conclusion, I would to say that whether taking this or that. its all are our choice and no one will control it. i am very afraid to taking risk in my life. this is our life.

p.s. HI friends ., is this essay is too shot for iellts exam.
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Writing Feedback / IELTS; Why do people work? Reasons/ Examples [4]

People work because they need money to live, what are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of this reason. Use a specific example and details to support your answer.

Majority people are working because of the money. Money is very important in our life and its bring us happiness and enjoy life , but i dont think that everybody is like that. Some people are working without payment and they need experience as satisfaction and service. So today I want to explain some other reason and have good example for my reasons.

Firstly, some people are working very hard as other people and they get low salaries as compare to other society or other nation. It's because of they are serving they nation or society. For example, I m refugee and in our society, most of government worker have good skill and good teacher have low salary. It's all are serving they nation. If you have good skill or ability in any job. It's sure that you get satisfies salary in other nation.

Second reason is some people are working every day as without payment. That we call volunteer. This kind of worker has some other reason to do work and no for money. May be its like sympathy or want to help for other people or they are trying to get experience. For example in our school, every year they have Korean medical student come in our school and they teach how to wash our teeth and check our teeth. It's all are volunteer member. They have very cool kind heart.

In finally I want to say that they lots of reason working in this world and not only money. So in this short time I have no enough time to explain ever thing. So working for money is good but not going over or greedier on that.

Writing Feedback / 'My town is in Gaya' - IELST exam essay [5]

Here my topic is (some countries have come to rely on tourism on tourism as their major source of income.However, many people belibeve that the problems caused by tourism are more serious than those it has solved.)

To what extent doyou agree or disagree with this opinion?

In our country, the tourism are the major source of income and they give us fulfill of satisfaction in our life. I think that, they havenot cause serious problem in our town. But may some other country have caused some serious problem. So today i m partly to agree with this statement and here i have a good reson with suitable example on this statemen

My town is in Gaya and its in easten side of India. my town is most beautiful and wonderful place in the world. They have big buddist temple and most of tourism visied for this temple. Also in most of winder , they have teaching of happiness by some hight lama. We consider that day is big fasival. because they geather one milllion of people from different kind of countries. During that day they earns as double and troble as compare to they normal day. They charge double rent in hotel as rooms and lost of new tea shopes . Also lots of new restaurant and majority people are trying to sale some new things and serve for the tourist. Our people got more active on these days. All the road are full of traffic and , due to more new transportation of vehicle,

Also some other seson have lots of group tourist come see the view and visit temple.
so i dont think that tourist cause serious problem, may be they cause like steal some priceless things from temple or fight with local people.

In finally i like to tourist come our town and we share build our relationship and that is binefit for both side.