Posts by mannyalesh
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Noah and Utnapishtim are exactly the same person [4]
It would help if you try to structure your essay so that it discusses the theories clearly and then give your thoughts on it.
- Theory 1 description
- Theory 2 description
- How they compare
- How they contrast
I don't want to give you content advice because I am not well read about Noah and Utnapishtim.
I hope this helps!
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Short essay asking why i deserve this essay and how will i make an impact [6]
This is a good clear short essay. Make sure you make an emphasis on why you deserve this. You just discuss your families struggles but you didn't make a clear point on why you are deserving. The second part of the question is answered directly at the end of your essay though.
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