truongnhunhan
May 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS; Students from rural areas find difficult to receive higher education [5]
to move to or rebuild the campus toin rural areas
truongnhunhan
May 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Marriage older is more advantageous than marrying at young age! [3]
In the modern life, there are some debates between the advantages of marrying at the young age and at the older age. In my opinion, it is better to marry at the older because of some reasons.
First at all, marrying at the older age brings families a good finance status. It is neccessary for a couple to have stable jobs and this can takes a lot of time to achive. Money is the reason why young couples are not happy in the family life because they are too young to have a good finance status; as a result, there are so many conflicts in the family relating to money. Moreover, finance problems can lead to other problems in our life, for example, the children in the family are not in good conditions. At the older age, when people have enough time to work and save their money for the family life in the future, this can solves a lot of problems after marrying.
In conclusion, marrying at the old age brings so many advantages an we can avoid undesirable probems in the family life. . .
In the modern life, there are some debates between the advantages of marrying at the young age and at the older age. In my opinion, it is better to marry at the older because of some reasons.
First at all, marrying at the older age brings families a good finance status. It is neccessary for a couple to have stable jobs and this can takes a lot of time to achive. Money is the reason why young couples are not happy in the family life because they are too young to have a good finance status; as a result, there are so many conflicts in the family relating to money. Moreover, finance problems can lead to other problems in our life, for example, the children in the family are not in good conditions. At the older age, when people have enough time to work and save their money for the family life in the future, this can solves a lot of problems after marrying.
In conclusion, marrying at the old age brings so many advantages an we can avoid undesirable probems in the family life. . .
truongnhunhan
May 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Which is more advantages? Marrying young or older? [2]
TOPIC: The advantages of marrige at a young age to marrige at an older age.
Nowadays, people believe that marrige at young age will give them many benefits, especially for Eastern because they have an opener-awareness in this issue than n the past. And with me, as a young generation person, I think if two people thought carefully and truthly love each other, they should be accepted.
An early marrige will give husband and wife a chance to spend a longer time to stand by and have more unforgetable memories. People just think it's is easier for them to marry when they mature because they already have a good job, a nice house and a stable life. But how long does it take for everybody reach that goal? We could abandon many chances to live with the one we love and when time is gone, we can't take back. Marrying starts from love and carrying, so we can support each other in life and make it becomes easier. we can reduce time earning money to buy house, can stand by side to encourage or give a hand in darkest hour. Morever, marrying is a commitment, it requires people have to live with more responsibilities, and think it's one of the most advantage of early marrige. It help young people grow up and change their minds and their behaviors, because sooner or later they 'll be role models for their children.
Therefore, I agree with some of people's viewpoint that marrige at young age is somehow good.
TOPIC: The advantages of marrige at a young age to marrige at an older age.
Nowadays, people believe that marrige at young age will give them many benefits, especially for Eastern because they have an opener-awareness in this issue than n the past. And with me, as a young generation person, I think if two people thought carefully and truthly love each other, they should be accepted.
An early marrige will give husband and wife a chance to spend a longer time to stand by and have more unforgetable memories. People just think it's is easier for them to marry when they mature because they already have a good job, a nice house and a stable life. But how long does it take for everybody reach that goal? We could abandon many chances to live with the one we love and when time is gone, we can't take back. Marrying starts from love and carrying, so we can support each other in life and make it becomes easier. we can reduce time earning money to buy house, can stand by side to encourage or give a hand in darkest hour. Morever, marrying is a commitment, it requires people have to live with more responsibilities, and think it's one of the most advantage of early marrige. It help young people grow up and change their minds and their behaviors, because sooner or later they 'll be role models for their children.
Therefore, I agree with some of people's viewpoint that marrige at young age is somehow good.
truongnhunhan
May 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / University education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree? [6]
TOPIC: A university education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?
I agree that university education is important for success in today's world.There are some several reasons.The first reason is studying in university gives you experiences, which might helps you a lot in your future job.If you doesn't study in university you might fell nervous in the job and you may not success.Also, studying in university will gives you a lot of knowledge you need for your future job which makes you easy to success in today's world. In conclusion,university education is very important for your success in the future.
TOPIC: A university education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?
I agree that university education is important for success in today's world.There are some several reasons.The first reason is studying in university gives you experiences, which might helps you a lot in your future job.If you doesn't study in university you might fell nervous in the job and you may not success.Also, studying in university will gives you a lot of knowledge you need for your future job which makes you easy to success in today's world. In conclusion,university education is very important for your success in the future.
truongnhunhan
May 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS, the reasons for increasing rubbish, and provide the measures for governments. [5]
contributing to producing..
There are many factors contribute to produce more wastes.
contributing to producing..
