Writing Feedback / {TOEFL} Man or Woman. Shall inherited physical differences be considered in order to [5]

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Man or Woman. Shall inherited physical differences be considered in order to complete a task. Agree or disagree?
Inherited physical characteristics are naturally the basic things which enable us to differentiate between two persons either it be man or woman. But it can never be selected as the benchmark on whose basis it can be judged whether a given task can be performed by a man or a woman. I am not at all ratified with the given statement because of some of the following reasons.

I do believe that a given task can only be performed successfully when certain required conditions are attained and definitely its completion does not depend on who is doing the task. In my opinion, completion of any task totally depends on the skills applied by the performer to attain the goal. And it certainly does not depend on the inherited characteristics.

There may be some conditions where a task requires physical toughness or mental presence or may be simple logic. But I believe in order to pacify a task one needs a wild sensation of passion and endurance inside him apart from these skills. It is the passion the rigidity which gives one the required energy to obtain his goals not the inherited physical qualities.

Some of the valiant examples are there in our country only who have the bravery and passion for their duties like Indira Nooyi, CEO of Pepsico. Apart from being a woman she is among the top 10 affluent women in the world. Saina Nehwal, Sania Mirza, Jhulan Goswami leading India's name in worldwide sports entertainment. Kiran Bedi, Pratibha Patil, Sarojini Naiduetc many such examples we can get showing a woman's courage and endurance right from Razia Sultan's era.

On the other hand we have Sanjeev Kappor also, worldwide renowned chef. Atal Bihari Vajpayyeji, Gandhihji etc. So, i can say with full confidence that the completion of a task or achievement of a goal totally depends on the passion, rigidity and skills applied to complete it and not the inherited physical qualities.

Writing Feedback / 'Old is Gold' - keeping old friends or making new ones? -TOEFL [4]

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It is more important to keep old friends than to make new ones. Agree or disagree..??
Friends are like our co-travelers in our life's journey. When we fall, they boost us to lift up and get the goal and when we actually get our goal, they are the ones who greet us in our victory celebration. In my point of view a loyal friend has equal importance in our life as our own relatives. Man actually needs friends. To be fastidious its our basic need or our want. So, one right from his school's first day start making friends. Old friends, new friends, best friends, pen friends etc. one can classify a friend within many such labels. But i personally believe that these are the old friends who are far more important than the others because of some of the following reasons.

As per they say, "Old is Gold...!!!", to me the closeness, comfort and coziness provided by an old mate is far more precious than even gold. Our old mates are those who have seen every phase of our life, right from our childhood to our geriatric. They are known to each and every character and habit of ours. Our likes, dislikes, our face's expression when we are angry or filled with blithe. To be meticulous everything. While new ones usually join us because of what we are or may be because they need something from us.

Again our inside's hidden childhood or frankness which we want to express only comes easily in front of our old buddies. The reason to this is again we do feel the easiness in front of them. While, while making new friends one need to adapt or adjust to be precise with the other's character.

Old friends are more caring towards us as they have no selfishness inside them. That's why i do feel secure with them because they are flexible. Instead of turning us they adapt themselves according to us. For instance, i am right now in Bangalore as a trainee in an IT firm. But i am basically from Howrah. I love to make friends as they are needed. I have my old friends in Howrah and the new ones here in Bangalore. I have seen that whenever i need to hangout with my bangalorian mates i need to first inform them a day before or take an appointment. In the contrast, whenever i go back to my place i find my old buddies down there on the station platform waiting for me every time.

My views about friendship are pretty clear. It is not actually about deeds, its about emotions and feelings. They win over our emotional quotient. So, as rather than the mere physical presence emotional aspects have more respect in my life i do feel with full confidence that the old friends are more important than the new ones.

Writing Feedback / Young vs. Old generation - who is having more fun? - TOEFL [4]

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Young people enjoy life more than the older people do. Agree or disagree with the statement?
Enjoyment, entertainment or amusement has pretty much the same sort of importance in everyone's life. It is a refreshment in one's life in order to break the boredom of normal or regular routine and helps to revitalize he/she to continue their work with an accelerated pace. So, I am not at all ratified from the given statement.

Enjoyment yields one with a sense of satisfaction. It is like an Energy-drink. Everyone has his/her own flavor to select i.e., everyone has his/her own measures to keep themselves amused or to enjoy life. It just cannot be decided by considering generation as the base in order to know that who enjoys the more. For instance, i after my hectic schedule of tuition and classes prefer to play some racing games on my pad in order to feel refreshed. On the other hand my father after his breath-taking works prefer to go for meditation or yoga to pacify himself. It does not end here, sometimes i also go for yoga with him and sometimes he joins me with my games enacting as a commentator or by challenging me for a game.

So, i do feel that generation gap should not be even considered as a benchmark with a motive to deduce that who enjoys life the more. Like the flavors of an energy-drink it totally depends from person to person who chooses which path or method to satisfy him/herself. For example, a hermit feels enjoyment in his meditation and the peace which he gets from his neighboring environment. A boxer pacifies him/herself by beating out the thirty-two outs of his/ her respective opponents. He/she does not demand for peace which a hermit looks for during his/her fight. A doctor finds pleasure in curing his/her patient's heels even after his/her hectic abnormal schedule.

So, it cannot be stated that younger people enjoy more or less than the elders. It totally depends on the measures one selects to keep him/her life ratified.

Writing Feedback / Students staying away from parents as they mature - TOEFL [5]

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Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?

Nowadays, some young adults do feel to stay away from their parents as soon as they find out that they are mature enough to handle themselves. In the contrast, there is an another troop of young adults who do prefer to be with their respective families for a longer time. I with full confidence feel that the second scenario has far more pros then the first one. I find the other situation as more beneficial or better because of the following points.

First, dwelling with family provides us altruistically with the warmth, love and coziness of relationships. In a relationship we do have many sort of bonding with our relatives which acts as the comfort seat in our life's journey. Sharing the feelings with relatives do kill our stress, it even acts as balm on our heels. For instance, whenever after my office work i return to my place, i strictly give my first half an hour to my uncle's little 5-year old daughter, who by making faces or by her funny childish games revitalize me from my all work stress.

Second, thriving with family enables one to be in touch with the other members of the family and most importantly introduces us with different member's different characteristics. This shows us how the other people live their lives. For example, my father is an entrepreneur. He is the Director of a real estate firm. So, i do get to know some leadership or potentate qualities from him. The way he handles the firm. These things are of great relevance in our life.

Third, bonding with family members helps to maintain family's culture and stature in front of the society. Every culture is unique and exclusive. With the younger generation in contact with the predecessors helps in the flourishing of their culture.

Family's contact and background also gives support in any phase of life, either it be sweet or harsh. Family's support kills boredom and monotonousness of life. While if independence is considered, I complete it by saying this that if relationships with our respective relatives is maintained with utmost Care, Purity and Frankness then one would get the most independence while living with the family because it is well said that," Life is too short, gather as many as companions possible."

Writing Feedback / Now many employees have the option to telecommute - why? [7]

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More and more employers are offering their employees the option to telecommute, that is, to carry out their work from home via the Internet as opposed to working in the office. Why do you think employers have started to provide this option?

Nowadays, employees working from home via telecommuting or virtual conferencing for an organisation is turning out to be a new working culture. Moreover, their respective employers are boosting them to do so. Definitely, this is for a reason. According to me there are the following key points as the genuine reason for this ameliorating facility.

Firstly, employees working from their respective places do yield their hundred percent result by the comfort-ability provided to them on their respective couches. This is the fundamental rule of Management and entrepreneurship that in order to get hundred percent efficiency from the employees, the employer must provide them with the adequate amount of Motivation Factor. In management aspect it can be known as an 'Incentive'. With the motive to achieve the presumed goals an employer provides its employees with this incentive. A man can only give his full output when his nearby environment is suitable to him giving him the colors of comfort, coolness and best environment to work. And for a man home can be the best place containing that environment where there is no need for him to adapt. Its definitely familiar than the official private box-shaped chambers.

Secondly, working eight to ten hours in office chambers an employee do feel restlessness. So, in order to sanguine the true outcome of an employee employers do follow this way to deal with them.

Lastly, employers provide this facility to their employees by considering their emotional aspect also apart from mental. For instance, an employee working from home can produce 100% output moreover he can find time to spend with his relatives and friends.

Employers also feel that if an employees can give the true outcome from home than lot of office space can be saved with saving of time and energy.

So, there are basically emotional and motivational aspects behind this idea of employers providing this facility to their employees.