Writing Feedback / Toefl: The reasons that people visit museums. [5]

Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reason and example to support your answer.

Since the beginning of human civilization, there were several valuable historical objects were established throughout world history. The best way that people can get into our past effectively is visiting the museums. Therefore, many people prefer to go to museums for some specific reasons provided here.

"The past is the high value of treasure". This proverb meaning that we can learn from the previous mistakes in order to prevent those problems occurred again. This is the reason why the educational system contains museums to be one of the study places. We can not deny that our societies have overcome many terrible situations by adopting high value lessons. The dissolution of Ayutthaya dynasty, for in stance, Thais have learnt deeply that the major cause leading to the end of prosperous land is losing the great unity among people. Recently, Thailand was facing unstably political situation and having enormous argument between government and citizen. Eventually, Thailand could go through that worse trouble painstakingly since the both sides implemented the lesson from the Thai history. Let's try to imagine that how that situation will be if Thais did not learn from the past through museum.

Another reason is most of the tourists always realize that they will be enjoy in the sophisticated and meticulous objects in the museum. Since, the museum is the institution which collects and preserves artifacts or important cultural and artistic relics. Furthermore, museum keeps our history alive. That will completely make the guesses touch a bliss of pride in human civilization.

Moreover, observing in the museums will definitely bring about impressive feeling to springs in this generation. As modern people are perceive with the intelligence of their ancestors which can encourage them to be in pursuit of creativity so that invent high modern technology in order to comfort our human life.

We should conserve our heritages intentionally by taking care of museums. If we lost them, we will never get them back. Who will be able to deny the important of museum?

Thank you for your suggestions in advance.

Writing Feedback / Toefl: The characteristic of best friend that you prefer the most. [4]

What do you want most in a friend-someone who is intelligent, someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

"No man is an island". This is the proverb meaning that everyone can not definitely live without others. This is the reason why people have to have friends. There are completely dissimilar types of peers. Apparently, different persons need different friends' characteristics. From my perspective, the most personality of my best friends that I value highly is credibility.

Let's try to imagine that we are betrayed by our best friend. How do we feel at that terrible situation? Yes, we will completely feel deeply regret and that feeling will not disappear forever. Since, you lay your trust on him totally more than others. Therefore, I always perceive that I will never choose some friend who not sincere in order to prevent that worse circumstance happened to me later.

Admittedly, people having clever friend gain great strategies to solve some problems while people having humorous friend are always fun. However, it is just one moment that never last. On the contrary, if we have some friend is reliable to us both in front and behind, we will significantly live feel a bliss of happiness. As such that kind of friend will always help you, stand by your side whenever you are facing any tremendous impediments in your life. Sometime when you lose your confident, he will come to encourage you to go forwardly with determination. Or even you accomplish your ultimate goals, he will feel appreciate with your success sincerely. Furthermore, when you have to do something more necessary, you will usually trust on him to take an important role in your task. These are only little the advantageous parts that you will gain from this credible friend.

Who will be able to deny the important of reliable person and try to choose this person to be you best friend? I am the one that always seek that one who I can say totally that he is my best friend eternally.

I try to write this essay within 30 minutes. Therefore, I could see some mistakes in my essay.
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Writing Feedback / TOEFL:What is a important skill to succeed in life. [8]

What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Accomplishment is the supreme goal of every person in this world. Many vital characteristics bring about success in our life. Personally, the most essential skill for person wanting to succeed is leadership skill because of three main following reasons.

First, the more we have leadership skill, the more we are distinctive among others. People who have great confidence always do everything effectively and easily to be impressed by their boss. I have been noticed that many successful person are charismatic which is one of the chief appearances especially Barack Obama, the president of America.

Secondly, If we have main talents of leader, we will be able to retrieve abilities from our co-worker. A person who has leadership skill will definitely know the great strategies to gather all competences from others in order to fulfill their objectives eventually. My cousin, Nui, he achieves his business and becomes rich nowadays since he knows how to pull his employees' potentials out which completely help his company has progressed till today.

Furthermore, without leadership skill, we tend to give up from tremendous obstacles easily. Everyone clearly knows that patience is a highest virtue of success and patience is one minor of this skill. My friend, Ball, he always endure to several enormous impediments even if he has to face a hard time. Consequently, he gains reliability from his boss and he will be promoted to grow up in his work.

Success in life is not too hard for a person who has all characteristics of chief. From my perspective, I truly believe that this skill will absolutely bring about triumph to our lives. Who will be able to deny the important of leadership skill?