Writing Feedback / IELTS- opinion about languages dying out [5]

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Question: every year several languages die out. Some people think it is not important that life will be easier if there are less languages.

It reports that every year some languages die out, which seems to be an inevitable process during globalization. Toward this situation, some people welcome it with the reason that fewer languages will make lives much easier. Well, I feel sorry for their such short sights. Frankly, I do think a language's disappearance is a tragedy not only for people who spoke it, but also for our whole world.

First of all, language is a critical part of culture which play an important role in preserving, spreading and passing on culture generationally. In other word, if a language extinct, the relative culture will uproot soon without vessel to carry it which more or less, loss national identity for such groups of people. For example, I met some second and third immigrant Chinese family in New Zealand, some of them can not speak Chinese at all and do not even remember the date of Chinese New Year. Except their appearance, you can not pick up any Chinese influence from their thought and behalf, which seems Chinese culture totally broke at their generation.

What's more, language is a treasure from ancient's wisdom, which is not only used to describe stuff but also to express vision of the world and life. I remember when I traveled in New Zealand, what impressed me most was nearly everyone can speak some Maori language and lots of people(both Maori and non-Maori people) even attend classes to learn it deeply which they seldom can use in their daily life. They revalue Maori culture, after being unvalued and abandoned for decades. So learning Maori language becomes a key way for them to understand and preserve this culture.

Well, it is kinda true that less languages can make lives easier because people can communicate easily. On the other hand, the world will be blankness, if everyone speaks the same language, thinks similarly, behaves in the same way.

As conclusion, it may be a nature process that some languages died out or are coming to an end. Well, what we can do is to make effects to preserve and revalue as many as we can. Otherwise,we may not only loss some languages but also loss some culture.

Writing Feedback / IELTS; Study foreign language in primary school or middle school? [3]

As globalization expands every corner of the world, to be competent in other languages show great benefits in some aspects of life such as applying for a job in international company and traveling abroad. Thus foreign language courses are opened in most of the schools to help students to be equipped with such skill. Well, when comes to educational issues, experts always discuss the best time for children to start to learn a foreign language. And some of them suggested that it is better for children to start it in primary school than in middle school which I generally agree with such idea.

It is commonly understood that the longer you learn a foreign language, the more proficient you become, it stands to reason that the benefits become more important the longer you sturdy another language. So the advantage of starting children learning a foreign language is significant. At younger age, children usually learn things by mimic which is one of the most important skills in the first stage of a language learning. You always can find young children can pronounce most exactly as what they heard. As said, they just like a empty vessel and accept whatever is poured in. In primary school, pupil have more energy to focus on foreign language study for their schooling subjects are less than in the middle school. What they learn in early period, can open them to a better global understanding, so the learning of a different language and culture further that develop greatly. help them obtain a general idea about such language which indeed make it easier in further study in middle school.

There are still some disadvantages to open a foreign language study in primary school. One is comprehension which matters a lot when comes to learn some grammar. It is quite hard to let young children to understand such abstract part of a language. Another one is that it may give pupil too much pressure to learn a language which totally different from their mother tone.

Well, over all, obtain a foreign language is a tendency all of the world which is better to begin to start in primary.