Undergraduate / student inspired by Mahatma Gandhi -Electrical Engineer - Johns hopkins Writing supplement [NEW]

i m an international student applying for Johns hopkins (only few hours left please help me )
can you please find grammatical errors and give opinions about the whole essay or mention the part you find best in this article

As a student inspired by Mahatma Gandhi I always believed that practice is worth more than tons of preaching. And always actively participated in a thing that requires practical knowledge, overall concentration and enrich my spontaneous thinking.

As long as I remember I have found Engineering extremely appealing for variety of reasons, especially for my interest in making machines more intelligent and more advanced. And I always believed that Electrical Engineering is a field that provide a collaborative environment for researches that can solve world problems and may change millions of lives.

I always wanted to graduate as an Electrical Engineer from a world famous college that will place a firm foundation for my future career as an innovator and technical revolutionist, so that I can place a vital role in the development of the whole nation and make my country India feel proud by making it as the most advanced place on earth and open endless opportunities for new generation kids.

JHU's engineering program hulks very deep in my head; because of their all-rounded programs and luxurious science labs and I believe Johns Hopkins University will help me achieve those dreams with their challenging work and world acclaimed teachers.

One of the best things I found is that research programs are one of your top priorities. I always wanted to be a significant part of any researches. Because I relish working in groups and help humanity to explore and discover all the hidden secrets. I am very positive that Johns Hopkins University is the ideal college for me.

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Undergraduate / engineering program hulks in head - Northwestern University writing supplement McCormick [NEW]

i m an international student applying for northwestern university (only 1 day left please help me )
can you please find grammatical errors and give opinions about the whole essay or mention the part you find best in this article

As a Mahatma Gandhi inspired student I always believed that practice is worth more than tons of preaching. And after watching the list of classroom activities and practical knowledge offered over here, I was very positive that northwestern university would be the ideal college for me.

Since my teenage I was extremely appealed toward fancy science labs and used to Google about different kinds of labs and found Robert R. McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science have got all of them, and more unique thing that it got even more the ones I used to fantasize. One of the luxury that McCormick provides is their Ford Motor Company Engineering Design Center, for me it is as feeling heaven, without even dying, as they provides with a collaborative environment and have facilities of research rooms and project display areas that open endless opportunities.

NU's engineering program hulks very deep in my head, because I have many dreams about my engineering career in which I make machines more intelligent and more advanced and I believe Northwestern will help me achieve those dreams with their challenging work and world acclaimed teachers

One of the Best things I found is the research programs as one of their top priorities and have budgets of 1.5 billion annually and also offers summer research programs for undergraduates; I always loved working in groups and solve problems that interest me and may change millions of lives.

Undergraduate / Priority research programs - Northwestern University Common application -essay [2]

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Northwestern Statement: What are the unique qualities of Northwestern - and of the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying - that make you want to attend the University? In what ways do you hope to take advantage of the qualities you have identified? (250 words)

As an international student Northwestern University caught my eye when I saw their international undergraduate enrolment continues to experience increases, and then I researched more and got to know about their prestige and reputation and got a clear vision that this school will be best for me. Since my teenage I was very impressed by films like Fast & Furious, Avengers and T.V. series like Prison Break because they have one thing in common that they have a team and they complete their mission in a group, first they make a master plan and then they execute it. I was so inspired by this thought that I founded some clubs in my school in which we work as a team and accomplish things which were impossible to be done alone. In Robert R. McCormick School of Engineering and Applied Science I got to see a similar trend by watching a promotional video of Ford Motor Company Engineering Design Center where it provides with a collaborative environment and have facilities of research rooms and project display areas which I always dreamed in my ideal college. I have many dreams about my engineering career in which I make machines more intelligent and more advanced and I believe Northwestern will help me achieve those dreams with their challenging work and help of prestigious teachers.

One of the Best thing I found is the research programs as one of their top priorities and have budget of 1.5 billion annually and also offers Summer research programs for undergraduates, I always loved working in groups and develop or research about something that I am excited or curious, so I think Northwestern University is all I need to succeed