anshita
May 3, 2014
Scholarship / Essay about how international education will impact on your artwork and goals [3]
good writing
good writing
anshita
May 3, 2014
Writing Feedback / Culture in my hometown influences the increase cost of wedding party or marriage [7]
Looks good, but you need to focus on grammar.
Looks good, but you need to focus on grammar.
anshita
May 2, 2014
Writing Feedback / 'robotic teacher' - Will technology replace the teacher in classroom?? [4]
I hope I followed the same for the body paragraph.
1 reason
example
discussion
conclusion
can you tell me what else you are telling to change?
I hope I followed the same for the body paragraph.
1 reason
example
discussion
conclusion
can you tell me what else you are telling to change?
anshita
May 2, 2014
Writing Feedback / 'robotic teacher' - Will technology replace the teacher in classroom?? [4]
Hi, I have IELTS in a week, last time i scored 6.5 in writing. However I have to score 7. Im glad if you help me by giving your valuable points.
Topic: Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's world, the use of technology is ever increasing. Even in classrooms,technology can be commonly seen.It is disagreed that technology will completely replace the real teacher in a classroom. It is shown by analyzing the inability of a robotic teacher to discipline a misbehaving student in a classroom as well as a robotic teacher hindrance to the learning process of a student.
To begin with, a teacher powered by artificial intelligence would have little or no control over it's students.For example,it is commonly understood that children require the watchful eye of a teacher to ensure that they are Indeed doing their classwork,instead of fooling around during class time. Unfortunately this is something that a technology driven teacher simply cannot provide. Thus,this makes it clear why technology will never completely replace a teacher in the classroom.
Secondly, a robotic teacher would disrupt a student's learning process and in effect slow the ability of a student to absorb the information from the lessons. For instance, kids require motivation to be taught effectively. Such is a quality a human teacher possess but a technology driven instructor do not. From this it becomes quite evident that robotic instructor will never take the place of a real teacher in a classroom.
To summarize, a robotic teacher lacks the discipline needed to instruct students properly and actually operates to retard the student ability to learn new information. Thus it is clear that why the idea of having a classroom run entirely by a machine is not supported. After analyzing this subject,it is predicted that the negative aspects of the debate over computerized teaching will forever be stronger than the positive ones and because of this, computers will never replace teachers.
Hi, I have IELTS in a week, last time i scored 6.5 in writing. However I have to score 7. Im glad if you help me by giving your valuable points.
Topic: Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's world, the use of technology is ever increasing. Even in classrooms,technology can be commonly seen.It is disagreed that technology will completely replace the real teacher in a classroom. It is shown by analyzing the inability of a robotic teacher to discipline a misbehaving student in a classroom as well as a robotic teacher hindrance to the learning process of a student.
To begin with, a teacher powered by artificial intelligence would have little or no control over it's students.For example,it is commonly understood that children require the watchful eye of a teacher to ensure that they are Indeed doing their classwork,instead of fooling around during class time. Unfortunately this is something that a technology driven teacher simply cannot provide. Thus,this makes it clear why technology will never completely replace a teacher in the classroom.
Secondly, a robotic teacher would disrupt a student's learning process and in effect slow the ability of a student to absorb the information from the lessons. For instance, kids require motivation to be taught effectively. Such is a quality a human teacher possess but a technology driven instructor do not. From this it becomes quite evident that robotic instructor will never take the place of a real teacher in a classroom.
To summarize, a robotic teacher lacks the discipline needed to instruct students properly and actually operates to retard the student ability to learn new information. Thus it is clear that why the idea of having a classroom run entirely by a machine is not supported. After analyzing this subject,it is predicted that the negative aspects of the debate over computerized teaching will forever be stronger than the positive ones and because of this, computers will never replace teachers.
anshita
Apr 25, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should children be reeducated with severe methods? [8]
I hope, you could have taken your stand in Introduction paragraph.
I hope, you could have taken your stand in Introduction paragraph.
anshita
Feb 24, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Computers have made life easier Vs Complicated ?? [5]
Some people say that the invention of computers is one of the greatest invention of humankind's invention and computer simplified our life .However, others think that computers make their life complex and stressed. I agree with those people who believe that computer brought many benefits and plays vital role in today's modern life.
First of all, every company uses a computer to store it's data and make different kinds of operations. We can't imagine life without computers now a days. Imagine a computer with thousands of papers to store or imagine a bank without computerisation. It's very hard to get piece of information from these companies. one has to wait for long hours, while employee is searching for the information paper by paper. It wastes one's valuable time and effort. on the other hand, by using computers, one can get any information within second from anywhere.For example, when i was a child, my parents used to go railway stations and get the tickets after having spend lot of time in queue lines. However, today we can get train tickets from our home itself by having computer, internet access and bank debit card for transaction. Computer makes our life very simple and easier, I can say.
Second of all, Computer is one of the means for communication. It is easiest and cheapest way to communicate with relatives, friends, and business partners around the globe. In olden days, people used to send telegraphs and they had to wait for reply for 3-4 days. Now, by using computers we are able to exchange our feelings with others in no time. Also, a person can buy any product in online by using computers from anywhere. He/She does not have to walk out and do shopping reluctantly.
Finally, It is because of computers, one can able to find better employment opportunities suitable for their abilities all over world. Farmers are able to find better market for their products and are able to fair price for their yields.
In conclusion, I feel that despite of few odds which are minimal, computers brought many advantages and makes our life easier. It changed our attitude towards life. People became more closer and friendlier.
Some people say that the invention of computers is one of the greatest invention of humankind's invention and computer simplified our life .However, others think that computers make their life complex and stressed. I agree with those people who believe that computer brought many benefits and plays vital role in today's modern life.
First of all, every company uses a computer to store it's data and make different kinds of operations. We can't imagine life without computers now a days. Imagine a computer with thousands of papers to store or imagine a bank without computerisation. It's very hard to get piece of information from these companies. one has to wait for long hours, while employee is searching for the information paper by paper. It wastes one's valuable time and effort. on the other hand, by using computers, one can get any information within second from anywhere.For example, when i was a child, my parents used to go railway stations and get the tickets after having spend lot of time in queue lines. However, today we can get train tickets from our home itself by having computer, internet access and bank debit card for transaction. Computer makes our life very simple and easier, I can say.
Second of all, Computer is one of the means for communication. It is easiest and cheapest way to communicate with relatives, friends, and business partners around the globe. In olden days, people used to send telegraphs and they had to wait for reply for 3-4 days. Now, by using computers we are able to exchange our feelings with others in no time. Also, a person can buy any product in online by using computers from anywhere. He/She does not have to walk out and do shopping reluctantly.
Finally, It is because of computers, one can able to find better employment opportunities suitable for their abilities all over world. Farmers are able to find better market for their products and are able to fair price for their yields.
In conclusion, I feel that despite of few odds which are minimal, computers brought many advantages and makes our life easier. It changed our attitude towards life. People became more closer and friendlier.
