Writing Feedback / Ielts take 2 Young people attitude towards parents and grand parents [4]

2 Young people have different ideas and attitudes with their parents and grandparents. What are the differences? What problems may be caused? (100211)
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Recently, there has been a social concern in regards to what different attitudes children hold towards their parents and their grandparents. Indeed, children grow up with two important people and these two people treat them in quite different ways. I will discuss this issue below.

In the first place, children regard their parents as enemies. In most of the family, conflict between children and parents are inevitable. First of all, as children increasingly tend to focus on computer games and their parents have to work all days, they both may lose their interests on activities like talking with each other. Therefore, this lack of communication may give rise to family conflict. Moreover, children and their parents tend to have different personalities, different opinions and different ways of expressing themselves, which may contribute to generation gap.

However, children tread their grandparents as friends. The reason is that, compared with parents, grandparents tend to have more time to stay with their grandchildren. For instance, after retirement, grandparents will enjoy more free time in which they can keep up with their grandchildren' interests such as listen to their music, watch their television or play game with them, and this will create a positive communication.

After having considered all the points that I have discussed above, we can finally draw a conclusion that parents too focus on their job and have less time to spend with their children ,whereas grandparents tend to accept their interests and make the positive communication

Writing Feedback / Ielts: invite letter: for Tom - coming for a visit in Beijing [5]

You have an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. His son has a short vacation before going to college. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

1. Invite your friend's son to come to your city,
2. Introduce some interesting places to visit
3. Say something about the weather in the city you live
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Dear Mr. Robert,
I am so pleased to receive your letter after quite a long time and I am happy to learn that your son will have a short vacation a week later.

I am here to invite your son, Tom to come to my country for a visit.
As you know I am living in Beijing so that there are many attractions and places that Tom can visit. First of all, there is a place called "Middle Street" where you he can eat a lot of our traditional food and snacks like Peiking Duct. Secondly, as my hometown is located in the centre of china, the temperature is relatively mild compared with other cities, and more importantly, there is no extreme weathers like cyclone in your city.

Finally, I can guarantee that Tom will have a great time here and of course my family will prepare a meal of welcome on his arrival.

I look forward to receiving your reply.
Best Regards,
Your friend Matt.
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Writing Feedback / Ielts: complaint letter - dissatisfaction with the T-shirt [4]

You recently bought an item of clothing in another town, but found some problems with it after you returned home. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter,

1. Say what happened
2. Explain the problems
3. Say what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the T-shirt that I bought last week.
I have been your royal customer for many years. Last Friday, I bought a T-shirt from your shop and the poor quality of this shirt makes me very disappointed. First of all, the length of two sleeves is different, which makes me impossible to wear. In addition to this, the colour of the shirt does not match the sample that I have decided in your shop.

I have already discussed these problems with one of staff - Mr. Robert in your store by phone. But he was very rude and told me he can do nothing about it, as it was purchase at a reduced price.

Unless you replace the door T-shirt, I will be forced to take a legal action.
Your earliest response would be highly appreciated
Your Sincerely,
Shigang Xing
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I have been here for many days thank your guys very much i have leart a lot from here, although my knoledge in English is still poor . I will study hard to improve it.