motoja
Feb 1, 2015
Writing Feedback / The map illustrates 2 possible spots for building a new school. IELTs task 1 [4]
For this part, I don't think you should put too much of your own opinion such as this: Aside from that benefit, S1 is much closer to the university than S2 do, and thus this can espouse you to keep in touch with your sibling as you guys grow up.
To fulfill the 150 words requirement, what you can do is describing the information in more detail. For example, this is a map, so you should describe the direction of things related to each other. Example: The town of Canterbury is located 7 km east of Chartham and 5 km west of Sturry, S2 is at the southern edge of the town center, etc.
For this part, I don't think you should put too much of your own opinion such as this: Aside from that benefit, S1 is much closer to the university than S2 do, and thus this can espouse you to keep in touch with your sibling as you guys grow up.
To fulfill the 150 words requirement, what you can do is describing the information in more detail. For example, this is a map, so you should describe the direction of things related to each other. Example: The town of Canterbury is located 7 km east of Chartham and 5 km west of Sturry, S2 is at the southern edge of the town center, etc.