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Posts by huongkhoi1708
Name: Nguyen Ngoc Huong Khoi
Joined: Feb 19, 2015
Last Post: Feb 25, 2015
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From: Viet Nam
School: Nguyen Khuyen High School

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huongkhoi1708   
Feb 25, 2015
Writing Feedback / In order to produce a good movie for the audience, the film industry needs to push to their limits [2]

Some people prefer to watch serious movies while others say entertainment is the main purpose.

Movies are probably the most popular means of entertainment. Every year, millions of Vietnamese residents go to the box offices to experience high-quality films. There are many genres of movies such as blockbuster, romantic, comedy, western, epic, science-fiction and so on.

To my mind, I presume there are 5 factors that contribute to a good movie.
Firstly- the Director. If a movie is filmed by an experienced, talented director, it will be a da bomb movie. A good director does know how to lead the crew, capture the good and exotic moments.

Secondly - the Plot. The plot perhaps attacts the film-goers. A good and exciting story may make people willing to pay for the tickets. Besides, nowadays the adolescent already know the contain of both movies. For example in a romantic comedy : boy meets girl, they fall in love but the parents don't allow. Today we need to have the unique and unpredictable ending.

Thirdly- the scenes. Beautiful landscapes, mysterious islands or lands are the must have in modern films. People like to see the romantic scenes in a charming place, a horror story in a place of terror. These are the vital things that makes a film worth seeing.

Next- the characters(actors/actresses). If your film contains many celebrities, you'll definitely make a succeed. Besides the film-goers may find a lot of interest if we build up the charactors that have the same personality like them.

Last but not least, the commercial helps spread the film to the residents. With beautiful and a bit mysterious, people can find curious and they'll go to the cinema immediately.

All in all, in order to produce a good movie for the audience, the film industry needs to push to their limits, try harder to make excellent and high-quality films for us.
huongkhoi1708   
Feb 21, 2015
Writing Feedback / What is the worst job in the world ? [2]

For many people, model employee is perfect. I am opposite. It's the worst job in the world.
Models don't do useful things for society. They only wear high fashion clothes to perform on the catwalk. Some girls want to have fashionable clothes, expensive bags and shoes the same as the models. However, they don't have enough money to buy them, so they will do bad and inappropriate things such as they will steal their parents' money or get around rich old men.

For me, being a model is the worst job.
huongkhoi1708   
Feb 21, 2015
Writing Feedback / Thus far today, the world has been just like a small country with hyper [6]

Hi hungnguyen278!
I really like your work but there's one point that annoys me.

''First of all, individually work may help you to improve and develop your own ideas better '' : when you write '' First of all '' then afterwards you need to say secondly, then thirdly or lastly ( sum up is OK )
huongkhoi1708   
Feb 19, 2015
Writing Feedback / TELL ME ABOUT YOUR FAVORITE TV PROGRAMME ? [5]

Of all the TV programme I've seen, '' Overcome Myself '' is the programme which I enjoy the best.
'' Overcome Myself '' is very popular in Vietnam because of its humanity. It helps remove the burden of debt from the poor. It has been carried out over ten years and over one thousand families have improved their lives.

The poor can join in this programme. Every week one family can attend it. There are three rounds. In each round, the attenders must complete the challenges that are the same as their occupations. If they finish it on time, they will get a bounty.

What makes '' Overcome Myself '' interesting ? The question isn't difficult to answer because many famous celebrities take part in this programme and the prize is a big sum of money. Beisdes, there are two prizes for the audience, too.

'' Overcome Myself '' makes millions of viewers become teary since the attenders are not only poor but also disabled. I suggest you should watch it on TV at 7:00PM every Tuesday and recommend it to your friends.
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