lynzee22
Mar 6, 2015
Research Papers / How to weigh the cost and benefits of reloading your own ammunition [2]
Hello,
I am not sure what the questions was exactly, but from your post it seems as though it wants to know the pros and cons of reloading your ammunition.
First off, I would like to say that your essay was well written. However, you talk about HOW to reload your ammunition and how much it will cost etc. You do not actually make an argument for reloading your own ammunition rather than buying it from the store.
You could make a thesis saying something like "Reloading your own ammunition is more cost effective and shows more responsibility as a gun owner because it teaches you about your firearm, you become a more accurate shooter and it is cheaper.
Then you would make paragraphs arguing why these three points (or any points you think are important) make it a better choice.
It would also be good to present the counter argument. EX: Some people think that it is not a better choice because it is too difficult (or whatever argument people have against your point of view) Be sure to rebut the counter argument. This will make your paper much stronger.
I think a lot of the points you made in this essay will be good for supporting your argument, you just may want to restructure it so it has a clearer argument.
Hope this helped
Hello,
I am not sure what the questions was exactly, but from your post it seems as though it wants to know the pros and cons of reloading your ammunition.
First off, I would like to say that your essay was well written. However, you talk about HOW to reload your ammunition and how much it will cost etc. You do not actually make an argument for reloading your own ammunition rather than buying it from the store.
You could make a thesis saying something like "Reloading your own ammunition is more cost effective and shows more responsibility as a gun owner because it teaches you about your firearm, you become a more accurate shooter and it is cheaper.
Then you would make paragraphs arguing why these three points (or any points you think are important) make it a better choice.
It would also be good to present the counter argument. EX: Some people think that it is not a better choice because it is too difficult (or whatever argument people have against your point of view) Be sure to rebut the counter argument. This will make your paper much stronger.
I think a lot of the points you made in this essay will be good for supporting your argument, you just may want to restructure it so it has a clearer argument.
Hope this helped