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Jul 29, 2015
Writing Feedback / The cultural adaptation is crucial however people should also not forget their own customs. [3]
Hi you, I am a beginner. And below are my recommendations
Many people currently concur with the notion of social integration in a country rather thandivide it into different minority groups with their own cultures and traditions.
cultural adaptation is crucial forpeople migrating to other countriesimmigrants
There are several reasons as to whymigrantsthe immigrants should assimilate into the new culture
Vietnamese culturehas long beenis famous for
many social norms being deemed to be perfectly normal in a country may befoundconsidered offensive from citizens of the otherssomewhere else .
Thus , it isunusualdisrespectful to dress in sensitive costumes when traveling in some Vietnamese cultural heritages and relics
To be more specific --> More specifically
"held within each culture is the uniqueness and freshness ....". - > Each country has unique culture, which would distinguish it from the others.(I make it shorter)
I hope that my recommendations will be useful for you!
Hi you, I am a beginner. And below are my recommendations
Many people currently concur with the notion of social integration in a country rather than
cultural adaptation is crucial for
There are several reasons as to why
Vietnamese culture
many social norms being deemed to be perfectly normal in a country may be
Thus , it is
To be more specific --> More specifically
"held within each culture is the uniqueness and freshness ....". - > Each country has unique culture, which would distinguish it from the others.(I make it shorter)
I hope that my recommendations will be useful for you!