lramad2
Jan 17, 2016
Undergraduate / Interests and focus - Essay prompt for Purdue [5]
Thanks a lot for your feedback! It's extremely encouraging :D Glad to know I finally wrote a decent essay haha.
As for the beginning, I figured starting with an anecdote would be good. It wasn't really a competition but was more of an exhibition where students showed off their talents. Out of about 250 submissions, ours was one of 7(or so) to be selected. I shortened it to remove the parts about loss and it is now at 650.
My physics professor entered the classroom with a spark in his eyes. He informed us, with excitement, of the upcoming science exhibition - the opportunity to build anything you wanted. Given a timeframe of two weeks, my friends and I decided to build a fully functional wind-turbine. Implementing theory into practice by building a dynamo; this was most definitely the highlight of working on the turbine. Our project, along with a few others, was chosen to be displayed at the entrance of the exhibition.
Thanks again. You really are amazing :D
Thanks a lot for your feedback! It's extremely encouraging :D Glad to know I finally wrote a decent essay haha.
As for the beginning, I figured starting with an anecdote would be good. It wasn't really a competition but was more of an exhibition where students showed off their talents. Out of about 250 submissions, ours was one of 7(or so) to be selected. I shortened it to remove the parts about loss and it is now at 650.
My physics professor entered the classroom with a spark in his eyes. He informed us, with excitement, of the upcoming science exhibition - the opportunity to build anything you wanted. Given a timeframe of two weeks, my friends and I decided to build a fully functional wind-turbine. Implementing theory into practice by building a dynamo; this was most definitely the highlight of working on the turbine. Our project, along with a few others, was chosen to be displayed at the entrance of the exhibition.
Thanks again. You really are amazing :D