Writing Feedback / Having an own car is more convenient than using public transport so vehicles number will rise. TOEFL [NEW]

Do you agree or disagree In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

The cars are very important in our life. We can use them to move out to any places that we need. If cars will be fewer in use in twenty years than today, some people would agree, and others would disagree. In my view, cars will increase than today for two reasons.

The main reason is that the distance between cities and places are becoming bigger. In order to the distance between places will be far than it were before, thus that most of people are going to buy cars to solve this problem, so they can move and travel where ever they want. The distance is a critical problem, and there is no way to solve it without own cars. For example, in 30 years ago, according to my father cars were used by few of people, and most of the people transfer by walking because places were closer to each other, so people were no needed to use cars. As we can see, cars will be more than what we have now.

Second, most of the people prefer to own cars instead of using public transport. In last years, most of the people prefer having their individual cars, so they feel free to go every place without waiting for buses or trains etc. For instance, my friend told me that most of the worker who work in his company have their own cars, and he said that because it is easy and convenient, also it is saving their time for having cars. Public transport goes around cities, and it might take 15 minutes until it gets you to your spot, so they are prefer owning cars. This example thought me that cars are going to be more in the future.

In sum, whether cities have big gaps between them or most of the people choose to own cars. The rate of cars are going to increase by using them than in the past.

Writing Feedback / A varieties of clothes change people - correct my essay for TOEFL practice [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.

Some people from past until now spend high amount of money for clothes. Since it is very significant for people who are care for looking. I believe that there are different views about if clothes change people behaviors . From my opinion, I believe that clothes might change people behaver for two reasons.

First, Changing behaver are kind of respect for high clothes. Some people believe if you wear high class clothes, you have to change your personality to match with your dresses .For instance, every year my mother's family have meeting, and in this meeting women wear expensive clothes, and their behaviors are different. They look very serious. It affected me because some of women I know their attitude when they don't were these dresses. I asked them for reasons of changing behaviors, they told me that because it respects for dresses to have artificial behaver. As we can see, if women don't wear theses kind of clothes, they will not change their behaviors.

Second, some companies require for their employs to change their behaviors when they wear work suit. Companies are care about their customer; thus, worker have to be more polite. For example, One day I visited my brother who works in hotel. I was very surprised because his behaviors very different .To illustrate, my brother likes to make jokes and to be funny, but he looks serious in his job. As we see, my brother would not change his behaver if he doesn't wear a suit.

In sum, people have different behaviors when they were quality clothes. For two reasons, people believe that when you were clothes' high value, you should respect that by changing your behaviors. Another reason, companies require for employs to adopt their behaviors during work. Everyone should keep their real attitude.