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Posts by bismillah
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Last Post: Nov 28, 2016
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bismillah   
Oct 3, 2016
Scholarship / The greatest influence of my leadership experience [3]

hi brother i have suggestions for you to make better essay in reading

if there are people who

I think that what made me like to take care ... related to the sentence previously

Something about leading and guiding people are fascinating and challenging

i have joined youth

i hope it can help you after you evaluate these corrections of mine
keep spirit ..
bismillah   
Nov 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / IF CARS COULD TALK, ACCIDENTS MIGHT BE AVOIDABLE [2]

Driver is dangerous , with the people who do not concern or regardless about truly concentration.the car accident is leading of death cause , 75% of car accidents in people age 16 or 19 in The United States but,most of them have nothing to do with drug or alcohol.

For example,when the speaker being accident of crasing car in the first time, even she stepped on the brake precisely at that time and finally, air bag deployed and fortunately, no one was hurt.

The probem of car accident is , when they did not know of what they should want to do of imergency condition and what their most important to do or prioritizing to attend on the road and also to avoid on that accident, keeping going to enjoy the comfort trip but,occasionally they sense something wrong or it was too late after they realized it as In countless accident, many drivers say as like" l did not see it came''

ted

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