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Sep 21, 2016
Writing Feedback / EILTS Writing Taks 1 Origin of Writing in some Place [7]
Hi Alamsyah Ismail,
I have few suggestions for you to improve your writing.
- Your headline : EILTS {it should be IELTS } Writing Taks {it should be Task ) 1 Origin of Writing in some Place
- Ancient tribe believes {you should use simple past tense for stating a fact} that origin writing was started froma thausand years ago.
- Such as {this words too common you can use For instance } Egyptians who believe that their god.....
Good luck!
Hi Alamsyah Ismail,
I have few suggestions for you to improve your writing.
- Your headline : EILTS {it should be IELTS } Writing Taks {it should be Task ) 1 Origin of Writing in some Place
- Ancient tribe believes {you should use simple past tense for stating a fact} that origin writing was started from
- Such as {this words too common you can use For instance } Egyptians who believe that their god.....
Good luck!