Writing Feedback / Bad effects of electronic inventions on people's health since people tend to overuse their gadgets [2]

A result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television , people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.

Nowadays, there are alot of electronic inventions. They raise life quality to be better. People spend lots of their leisure time using them and becoming dependent. They rarely use their free time to do physical activity. That habit has damaged their health gradually.

Lots of electronic inventions such as television, computer are now popular. Average time that users spend, is more than four hours each day. It is to hard to imagine life without electronic devices. However, using computer and others very long time will reduce your vision. Children in modern life know how to use computer, smartphone early.They prefer to watch TV, play game everyday, along with parents don't pay attention to their kids led to their health are affected. As a result, many children use glasses when they are very young. They become weak due to not doing exercise.

Obviously, computers and TVs have brought many benefits for all people in the world because we can get knowledge, experiences, informations everyday. But it will attack people health if they overuse.

In conclusion, technology has less negative effects more than positive effects, which bring for our life.

Writing Feedback / A number of jobs have been lost when computers replaced many positions [2]

Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem

From the last century, the technology has increased more and more with high speed. Along with advanced technology, computer has grown. They are many big benefits. We can use internet service to connected people over the world, expanding knowledge, developing economy,... However, computer has some disadvantages as well.

One of the most disadvantage is unemployment. A number of jobs have been lost when computers have replace many positions. Postman, who delivers letters, money and others thing, is disappeared because of express, email and ATM machine.

Nowadays, people use computer system and cash machine instead of hiring many employees as before. In the past, accountants used pen and paper for records. With computer technology advanced, it needs few employees. Computer help saving human sources but causing unemployment.

Librarian, a position in library, is not exist now because automatic computers have been installed. Formerly, Librarian must remember all book and its location. Now, it is not necessary. A computer system help them to do that. In addition, Electric book invention, called ebook take the place a part of traditional books. Ebook is smaller and more convenient than books. People can save a huge of ebook in their in smartphones, computers.

The number of position lost to computers grows, unemployment continues to get worse. Thus, I hope technology developing more and more, along with many new positions will be invented to resolve the human sources problems

Writing Feedback / Almost all families at present are small - not as the same as in the past, when families were larger [2]

Advantages and disadvantages with a small family

Almost families at present are small family, not the same in the past cause family are larger. Small family in the modern world have some advantages and disadvantages.

I think here are two main benefits when living in a small family. That is when parents have less children, they will pay more attention for their children and sons get good condition about education, health, ect. Next, in the small families, parents have more time so they earn more than big families. As a result, their life are more comfortable as well.

Beside, I believe there are three disadvantage. Firstly, children, who live in a small family, learned less social skills because there are few people in the house around them.Cause many helps and protections from their mother and father, they can't help in the house and depend themselves. Consequence they become irresponsible and selfish, that is second disadvantage. Lastly, they have few brother, sitter and both mother and father must earn, so they usually feel alone.

In my opinion, the disadvantages of the small family were worse than advantage. If parents don't teach them carefully about how make good behavior and a right lifestyle, they will be irresponsible.