oktoberlin12
Oct 12, 2016
Writing Feedback / TED Talk "How Fear of Nuclear Power is Hurting The Environment" [3]
Hai Gigih!
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Itprovesis proved by the amount...
His research shows[whose research is this?]Michael Shellenberger, the speaker of this TED Talk, found that the demand of...
...Ipsos in 2014 showed that solar energy was...
...part of the worlds,Inin[no capital letter after comma] the next 2040...
...nuclear reactors by online and it is...
...in air pollutionthat than coal, petroleum, biomass...
The conclusion is thatto solvesolving the climate crisis or to overcomeovercoming the clean energy crisis is not by judgingjudged by the nuclear machine...
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Hai Gigih!
Here are some notes for you.
It
...Ipsos in 2014 showed that solar energy was...
...part of the worlds,
...nuclear reactors by online and it is...
...in air pollution
The conclusion is that
Overall, your essay is well-written.
Hope this would help you.
You did a great job.