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Motivation letter for admission to Master International Business Engineering IAE Montpellier

2 - It is too soon to state this in the motivation letter. Keep this paragraph general in statement for...

LettersMiftaaj01 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Motivation Letter for Master's Program of Communication Science at VU Amsterdam

3 - Merged: Motivation Letter for Master's Program of Communication Science at VU Amsterdam Hi, I am applying for...

Lettershaivonam33 - Nov 27, 2025 / haivonam33 - 2 days ago
Image Processing & Computer Vision AI - Motivation Letter - Erasmus Mundus IPCVAI

3 - Thank you very much for the review. I will definitely address all these issues....

Lettersthehasni - Nov 25, 2025 / thehasni - Nov 26, 2025
Motivation letter for master's in Cybersecurity for CyberMAC scholarship program

2 - Refresh this presentation since this is a historical event that took place in your country's financial world. Describe...

Lettersasif033 - Nov 24, 2025 / Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Technical and analytical abilities - REFERENCE LETTER TO APPLY MASTER PROGRAM OR SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This does not sound like the country head wrote the reference letter at all. It appears to be more...

Lettersannhien - Nov 24, 2025 / Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Letter of Motivation for MS in Electrical Engineering at ETH Zurich

2 - Overall, the feel of the presentation is more of an academic and academic immersion biography rather than a professional...

LettersAditya_K - Nov 23, 2025 / Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Motivation Letter for Master in Artificial Intelligence at VU

3 - Thank you very much for the feedback!...

Lettersbadportfolio - Nov 23, 2025 / badportfolio - Nov 26, 2025
The aerospace industry - My career goals in my motivation letter

2 - I am unable to offer a clearer review of your career goals with regards to its relationship to your...

Lettersjoanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025 / Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Agricultural drones and more - Introduction for my motivation letter

2 - Are you applying for admission to a masters course? Or are you applying to continue your undergraduate studies as...

Lettersjoanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025 / Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Mot. Letter - ETH Zurich - Masters in Data Science - regarding intro & narrative

4 - And to note, only the last three para `Why ETH` is polished by AI not the first three. Moreover,...

Letterscosmicmnk - Nov 20, 2025 / cosmicmnk - Nov 22, 2025
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MSc CYBERSECURITY

2 - What community is this? If it is your local community, you need to justify the risks by showing...

Letterskbomber - Nov 18, 2025 / Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to master program in ESIEE Paris University

2 - The motivation letter of a masters degree course does not follow the same format as a college undergraduate presentation,...

LettersMiftaaj01 - Nov 12, 2025 / Holt - Nov 12, 2025
Letter master's Stipendium Hungaricum - Finance

2 - These are generic, run of the mill responses that could refer to your interest in any school. These...

LettersThe_Paragon - Nov 8, 2025 / Holt - Nov 9, 2025
Motivational letter for IPCVAI

2 - Rather than repeating the course structure to the reviewer, who is already familiar with the program and does not...

Lettersprabhat1 - Nov 6, 2025 / Holt - Nov 8, 2025
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - While the lack of pure quantitative experience is a major drawback for your application, the reviewer will gauge your...

Lettersctriver - Nov 5, 2025 / Holt - Nov 6, 2025
Motivational Letter for Erasmus RePIC Joint Masters Program / National Development Planning

2 - This is an inappropriate method of opening your motivational letter. You must maintain a professional and academic tone...

LettersNadyaamd - Oct 31, 2025 / Holt - Oct 31, 2025
Nepal education - Motivation letter for scholarship

2 - The way that you discuss your education in the essay is confusing. You are from Nepal but you studied...

Lettersrandooi - Oct 22, 2025 / Holt - Oct 22, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to bussiness technology master program in University of Twente

2 - You have some pretty good ideas presented in this essay. However, the way it is presented could be better....

LettersMiftaaj01 - Oct 21, 2025 / Holt - Oct 22, 2025
TU Delft - Motivation Letter for MSc Geomatics for the Built Environment

4 - I agree that you should limit yourself to 3 thesis presentations only if your interest in each is comparable...

Lettersluisog - Oct 19, 2025 / Holt - Oct 23, 2025
RNA biology - phd position in germany motivation letter

3 - Merged: im applying for PhD at IMPRS Germany. do a critical analysis of Motivation letter for me. ...

LettersRaania - Sep 15, 2025 / Raania - Oct 4, 2025
Biotechnology Neurasmus -Motivation Letter

2 - You should build on your research skills and published work. Expanding on the information behind these, your skills development...

Lettersannasmith - Sep 3, 2025 / Holt - Sep 6, 2025
MOTIVATION LETTER FOR BSC IN ELECTROMECHANICAL ENGINEERING

2 - When you reference academic achievements, you should be referencing awards and accolades that you received in relation to...

Lettersgaetano1991 - Aug 27, 2025 / Holt - Aug 27, 2025
Beyond Physics - recommendation letter to get gks scholarship

2 - Okay, the way that this essay was written shows the trained reviewer that the essay was not written by...

Lettersnusratsuchi7 - Aug 25, 2025 / Holt - Aug 26, 2025
Master's in Finance in Hungary - Stipendium Hungaricum

3 - Okay, I'll take it into account. Thanks...

LettersThe Paragon - Aug 24, 2025 / The Paragon - Aug 25, 2025
Financial specialization -Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum about trying to achieve a goal

3 - Thank you for the feedback!...

LettersThe Paragon - Jul 28, 2025 / The Paragon - Jul 31, 2025
Advice on Recommendation Letter for Fast Retailing Undergraduate Scholarship Program for Indonesian

3 - The letter of recommendation have a limit of around 200 words, so I'm really confused on what I should...

LettersSouzan - Jul 28, 2025 / Souzan - Jul 29, 2025
Cover letter for international software engineering internship

2 - The cover letter should fit one page using a font size of 12. You do not need to write...

Lettersamans - May 17, 2025 / Holt - May 18, 2025
My Data Engineering and Analytics M.Sc. Letter of Purpose

2 - You are supposed to write a statement of purpose. I have not read any purpose related information in your...

Lettersyigitcanh - May 5, 2025 / Holt - May 11, 2025
Bachelor of Science in Management and Data Science - Motivation Letter for University Application

2 - The motivation letter is good but too generic in terms of the academic and career motivations that led you...

Lettersfranki - Apr 20, 2025 / Holt - Apr 27, 2025
Supply Chain Management Master's Program Motivaston Letter

3 - Thanks a lot for your support....

Letterssimelsylmz - Apr 14, 2025 / simelsylmz - Apr 17, 2025
ICT Help desk Team Leader - Motivation for Applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback , I will take into consideration....

Lettersjasirias13 - Apr 1, 2025 / jasirias13 - Apr 1, 2025
Motivational Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master Nanoscience and Nanotechnology program

2 - Your letter contains some interesting points but lacks the advanced presentation style and chronological information delivery that should be...

Lettersjayashsahy - Mar 25, 2025 / Holt - Mar 31, 2025
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Program in Mathematical Modelling (MATHS DISC)

5 - @ssyynn in my opinion ,you have a lot of exposure and insight concerning the field but you have to...

Lettersssyynn - Mar 8, 2025 / Annabel - Mar 20, 2025
Review request: Letter of intent for ELAP Scholarship (Canada)

4 - @jvtarss I feel like expanding your discussion will create a better balance in your essay....

Lettersjvtarss - Mar 7, 2025 / Annabel - Mar 20, 2025
Motivation Letter for Master 1 in Life Sciences - PSL

3 - I think you are not giving us the write motivational reasons. Ask yourself: why am i writing this letter,...

Lettersjokon - Mar 5, 2025 / CeceSanandwa_04 - Mar 13, 2025
Letter of Motivation for Master's degree in Human-Computer Interaction (HCI)

2 - This is obviously related to your motivation so it would be a good idea for you to discuss...

Lettersnwabueze56 - Feb 26, 2025 / Holt - Feb 28, 2025
Motivation Letter- ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP FOR MATHS DISC JOINT MASTERS PROGRAMME.

2 - This motivation letter is background heavy. It fully illustrates your interest in the course and your applicable credentials. What...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025 / Holt - Jan 14, 2025
a motivation letter for applying master degree at university being a data analyst

2 - The information provided in the motivation letter is not as strong as it could be. It is in fact,...

Lettersdsuf - Jan 8, 2025 / Holt - Jan 9, 2025
Motivation Letter to KTH - Real Estate and Construction Management

2 - Details regarding this competition would help to create a more informative paragraph. Provide the name of the competition,...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Jan 5, 2025 / Holt - Jan 6, 2025
Design and structure - Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The information contained in the essay is not really geared towards a motivation letter. This is more of a...

Letterssafiraes - Jan 2, 2025 / Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Captivated by numbers - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP LETTER OF MOTIVATION

2 - While it is admirable that your father was your role model when it came to the development of your...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 1, 2025 / Holt - Jan 2, 2025
motivation letter for master of science by a data analyst with mechatronic bachelor degree

2 - You developed a personal statement rather than a motivational letter. The content of this paper are only an expanded...

LettersKyaw Aung - Jan 1, 2025 / Holt - Jan 2, 2025
The 5th Industrial Revolution - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

2 - You appear to be academically qualified for the scholarship but, have failed to include true motivating factors that would...

Letterssaddamprayogo - Jan 1, 2025 / Holt - Jan 2, 2025
Becoming a doctor - STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM MOTIVATION LETTER

3 - Hi Paul, Whilst this is good, you also need to talk about your academic achievements. This letter mainly...

LettersSwagata Paul - Dec 31, 2024 / OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
A Chinese language teacher - Motivation Latter- Stipendium Hungaricum 2025

2 - Your motivation to study Languages as a masters course needs to be better focused on the study of languages,...

LettersChiaoChiao - Dec 28, 2024 / Holt - Dec 29, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - The rest of this paragraph is too vague to gain the interest of the reviewers. You are not...

Lettersscottsimpson29 - Dec 20, 2024 / Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Psychology Motivation Letter for Behavior Change Master Program

2 - Since you already know that sustainability is not the main focus of the program, it stands to reason...

Lettersfemelements - Dec 16, 2024 / Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Outstanding academic performance - LETTER OF REFERENCE FOR UNIVERSITY ADMISSION

2 - Somehow, the letter reads like a longer version of your personal statement. That will give away the fact that...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Dec 12, 2024 / Holt - Dec 13, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc in Integrated Brain Sciences UZH/ETH

2 - You need to strengthen your motivation to study at UZH/ETH. It is not all about your preparation or previous...

Lettersivy_lee - Dec 9, 2024 / Holt - Dec 9, 2024
HER POV OF ME - Recommendation letter for a big scholarship

3 - @Holt Hello. Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. My course requires two letters of recommendation (mandatory): one...

LettersRaome - Dec 1, 2024 / Raome - Dec 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus-Mundus Master's program in Sustainable Design, Construction...

2 - The IELTS test is not connected with your academics. The reference to your band score is misplaced in...

LettersMubarokhz - Nov 30, 2024 / Holt - Dec 4, 2024
Motivation for PhD: Research Academic Journey

2 - Be specific about the type of research that you wish to pursue and what sort of researcher you...

LettersBinnu45 - Nov 28, 2024 / Holt - Nov 29, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc in Applied Physic at TU Delft

2 - These apply to your research experience, which does not factor into the motivation statement when compared to...

Lettersvattickdrz - Nov 27, 2024 / Holt - Nov 28, 2024
Motivation Letter for Embedded System Design in Hochschule Bremerhaven

3 - @Holt Hi. Thank you for your feedback. I need help with pinpointing exactly what academic path I wish to...

Letterssabeehalam - Nov 27, 2024 / sabeehalam - Nov 30, 2024
Improve my Motivation Letter for Masters in Environmental Engineering

2 - The reviewer reads over a thousand applications that have students claiming to have experienced one thing or another....

LettersAbeershaykh - Nov 19, 2024 / Holt - Nov 20, 2024
Civil Engineering - Motivation Letter for ETH Zurich Master's Application

2 - The weakness of this essay lies in how you do not really portray your strengths as a researcher and...

Lettersarjit - Nov 18, 2024 / Holt - Nov 19, 2024
Review my PhD motivation letter for aligned LLM companions

2 - Since you were part of a research and development team, you cannot claim to be the single developer...

Lettersvishalk - Nov 18, 2024 / Holt - Nov 19, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen

6 - Maybe you can say "With all aspects and desires stated" instead of "With everything said"...

Lettersmariegold - Nov 10, 2024 / Edukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

2 - Kindly edit this paragraph in particular to not sound like an extended version of your resume. The reviewer...

Lettersdarent - Nov 6, 2024 / Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Motivation letter for CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship programme for civil engineering.

4 - thanks @jasminee i have make suitable improvement kindly check it on my new threads Thank you again : )...

Lettersmilan123 - Nov 2, 2024 / milan123 - Nov 2, 2024

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