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Motivation letter for MSc Human Intelligence System Management

4 - Your motivation comes through clearly, especially the connection between your HR experience and your goal of moving into business...

Letters silviaholmes - Aug 15, 2026emillindberg - 2 days
Motivation Letter for GLOCAL Scholarship Pathway E: Institutional Change and Creative Industries

2 - Discuss this from a personal point of view. Do not include source citations in the presentation. That is not...

Letters dekpastel - Jul 17, 2026Holt - Jul 26, 2026
Motivation Letter for FOOD4S Erasmus Mundus Master Programme

2 - It is unacceptable to have you submit an exact replica of your previous essay to the EM program. The...

Letters UAQ - Jun 24, 2026Holt - Jun 25, 2026
Motivation Letter for FIPDes Erasmus Mundus Master Programme

2 - This paragraph can be omitted as it is not directly related to your motivation but is rather, an...

Letters UAQ - Jun 24, 2026Holt - Jun 25, 2026
Motivation letter for a masters degree in Biomedical Sciences

2 - Well, this is not an ordinary motivational letter. you have combined the focus points of a motivational letter, personal...

Letters MRK - Jun 16, 2026Holt - Jun 17, 2026
Essay for GOI-IES scholarship - Involvement in Irish Society

2 - The information contained in this essay is easily achievable and doable while a student in Ireland. The reviewer will...

Letters Asaphyp - Jun 16, 2026Holt - Jun 17, 2026
Political Science Master Motivation Letter that is rejected. I wonder why.

2 - I am not a reviewer from the university that you are applying to so I do not know what...

Letters lunargo - Jun 15, 2026Holt - Jun 16, 2026
Job application letter (nanny position)

2 - This letter is not well developed. While you introduced yourself in an acceptable manner in the first paragraph, you...

Letters NgaaPh - Jun 13, 2026Holt - Jun 13, 2026
Master's Programme Digital Media - Does this letter sound genuinely motivated?

2 - While the overall letter is quite impressive and shows a well rounded series of motivations for you, the...

Letters Kharanshoe09 - May 31, 2026Holt - Jun 1, 2026
Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

3 - Thank you for the feedback. You raise a valid point, the vision is present in the letter but fragmented...

Letters mujeeb576 - May 24, 2026mujeeb576 - May 25, 2026
Pakistan floods - My Letter of Motivation

2 - The last thing you should do is use the letter of motivation as your personal, academic, and professional experience...

Letters Khubaibkhan - May 19, 2026Holt - May 19, 2026
Software Company - Recommendation letter for a Master's program in Marketing in a Korean University

2 - The referee should be introducing her background to the reviewer. That means, giving her full name, position, number of...

Letters gureumy - Apr 30, 2026Holt - May 1, 2026
Motivational Letter for Joining the Renewable Energy and Sustainable Construction Masters Program

2 - There was a sense of the developing problem in your country, but there was definitely no reference to...

Letters abdullahseidu - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
Motivation Letter for Radboud University (Master of Strategic Human Resources Leadership)

2 - This portion is not substantiated in the presentation. You are coming to a conclusion and dictating a belief...

Letters annisapuspitadin - Apr 1, 2026Holt - Apr 2, 2026
Motivational Letter for MATHS-Disc Master's programme (Erasmus Mundus)

2 - This letter would probably pass an AI detector test by the review committee. However, it has several areas that...

Letters VascoMarqs1774 - Feb 27, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
"Labor migration" - Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus EMGS

2 - I would like to thank you for your honesty about your use of AI in "polishing" this paper. Yes,...

Letters Wifi4_55 - Feb 23, 2026Holt - Feb 24, 2026
Intelligent humans - Letter Of Intent - Undergarduate Turkiye Burslari

2 - It is difficult for me to give my approval to an essay that was at least 80% AI generated....

Letters langlang - Feb 20, 2026Holt - Feb 21, 2026
Motivation Letter Postgraduate Diploma in Earth System Physics The Abdus Salam International Centre

2 - I am not impressed by an application essay that is 80% AI generated. While the essay is highly academic...

Letters Jeff Tetteh - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Becoming a scientist - my motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - How was this community directly affected by the drought? What was the catalyst that moved you in this...

Letters kerr000 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Technology - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - Don't reference research or information from other sources. You should be able to make this reference in an...

Letters cateeoe - Feb 9, 2026Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Erasmus Mundus application motivation letter for edu_mig

2 - There is no need to indicate this in the letter. Instead, try to show your excitement and motivation...

Letters Agnul - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
Motivation letter for Master of Science in Artificial Intelligence at FAU

2 - Kindly remove the academic biography part of this motivational letter. The motivational letter is not the place to discuss...

Letters shipon - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Motivation Letter - Master's in Human Rights and Multi-level Governance

2 - The way that you used AI to polish this letter will be easily noticed by the reviewer. While you...

Letters ghosttwwriter - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Jan 31, 2026
Letter of motivation for a Diploma program in Tourism and Hotel Management

2 - The letter is off to a good start. It should be expanded to meet the 2 page requirement if...

Letters OngAnh - Jan 27, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Letter of Motivation for a Master's Programme in Product Service System Design

4 - The pain point is the reference in your essay wherein you indicated that you did extensive research work. Explain...

Letters shelfish - Jan 25, 2026Holt - Jan 27, 2026
"Luxury Laptop" - letter of intent for the Türkiye Burslari

2 - A letter of intent should not be confused with a personal statement. You wrote a very good personal statement....

Letters marvinbruce - Jan 22, 2026Holt - Jan 24, 2026
Motivation letter for Emotion- An Erasmus Mundus Master

2 - I believe that the essay will be better if you figure out a way to combine the information in...

Letters junior4408 - Jan 16, 2026Holt - Jan 17, 2026
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

2 - What has been written is a personal statement. This is not a motivational letter. Based upon the required information,...

Letters adiing093 - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship, ChemEng

2 - There is no need to share this information with the reviewer. It does not matter to him when...

Letters Friendlymarmot - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Motivation Letter BA in psychology for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - The first thing you have to do is remove the outline presentation of this essay. The motivation letter should...

Letters untammed_talent - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Letter of Motivation for Master of Sustainable Development at KU Leuven (Belgium)

2 - You are approaching this letter of motivation as a personal statement. That is the wrong approach. This essay is...

Letters btran0303 - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Motivation Letter – MSc in Energy Engineering, Politecnico di Milano

2 - This is your actual motivational statement. Therefore, this must be presented at the top of the essay rather...

Letters biggy1621 - Jan 11, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Master in Information Systems and Digital Business Innovation Lancaster University

2 - Try to expand further on your international work experience. This is something that would work to your benefit since...

Letters Miftaaj01 - Jan 10, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Motivation Letter for the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship in Creative Arts and Musicology

2 - Unfortunately the scholarship committee is going to see right through this AI generated application essay. That will prove to...

Letters nuilkham - Jan 9, 2026Holt - Jan 11, 2026
Motivation Letter for the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship- Computer Science

2 - The motivational letter does not fully meet the SH candidacy requirements. Where is the reference to your college degree...

Letters khalaf codes - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
"Corporate finance decisions" - Essay for master's Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - This is very rude of you to mention in the opening section of your essay. It is disrespectful...

Letters TheParagon - Jan 2, 2026Holt - Jan 2, 2026
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship- Computer Science MSc

2 - Paragraph number 4 directly address the national need for a person of your skills but fails to explain how...

Letters xeon39 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Jan 1, 2026
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship - OTM General Medicine, University of Pécs

2 - The essay does not descriptive address prompt 6 in relation to "How does your proposed study relate to a...

Letters overthinking_owl - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Jan 1, 2026
Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters in Imaging

2 - You are actually trying to over present yourself as an authority figure in this essay which may not sit...

Letters parallax404 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation for CYBERSURE - Master's programme in Cybersecurity and Assurance

2 - There is no such committee. There is only a general admissions committee that considers all of the applicants...

Letters dumbled00r - Dec 30, 2025Holt - Dec 31, 2025
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship, Msc in Autonomous Vehicle Control Engineer

2 - Your "Eureka!" moment that opened your eyes to the wonders of autonomous vehicles is not convincing. It is too...

Letters minh2910 - Dec 22, 2025Holt - Dec 26, 2025
Impact Entrepreneurship - Motivation Letter for EMMIE

2 - The letter feels like it has room for improvement. While I liked how you discussed your background and experience...

Letters varvar323 - Dec 17, 2025Holt - Dec 17, 2025
Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Master Impact Entrepreneurship EMMIE

3 - Merged: Motivation letter for Scholarship EMMIE Hello everyone, I am applying to the Erasmus Mundus Joint...

Letters Miftaaj01 - Dec 10, 2025Miftaaj01 - Dec 19, 2025
"capable organisations" - a motivational letter

3 - @Holt Thanks for the insights-they helped me a lot, since I didn't have a benchmark to compare it to....

Letters kafka - Dec 7, 2025kafka - Dec 8, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to Master International Business Engineering IAE Montpellier

2 - It is too soon to state this in the motivation letter. Keep this paragraph general in statement for...

Letters Miftaaj01 - Dec 3, 2025Holt - Dec 3, 2025
Motivation Letter for Master's Program of Communication Science at VU Amsterdam

2 - The motivation letter does not offer information that would show how the masters program would help you achieve your...

Letters haivonam33 - Nov 27, 2025Holt - Nov 28, 2025
Image Processing & Computer Vision AI - Motivation Letter - Erasmus Mundus IPCVAI

2 - What is the end result of this program? What do you want it to do? How and why...

Letters thehasni - Nov 25, 2025Holt - Nov 26, 2025
Motivation letter for master's in Cybersecurity for CyberMAC scholarship program

2 - Refresh this presentation since this is a historical event that took place in your country's financial world. Describe...

Letters asif033 - Nov 24, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Technical and analytical abilities - REFERENCE LETTER TO APPLY MASTER PROGRAM OR SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This does not sound like the country head wrote the reference letter at all. It appears to be more...

Letters annhien - Nov 24, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Letter of Motivation for MS in Electrical Engineering at ETH Zurich

2 - Overall, the feel of the presentation is more of an academic and academic immersion biography rather than a professional...

Letters Aditya_K - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
Motivation Letter for Master in Artificial Intelligence at VU

2 - Be career specific in this section to catch the eye of the reviewer. What is your career project...

Letters badportfolio - Nov 23, 2025Holt - Nov 24, 2025
The aerospace industry - My career goals in my motivation letter

2 - I am unable to offer a clearer review of your career goals with regards to its relationship to your...

Letters joanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Agricultural drones and more - Introduction for my motivation letter

2 - Are you applying for admission to a masters course? Or are you applying to continue your undergraduate studies as...

Letters joanaafedzie - Nov 22, 2025Holt - Nov 23, 2025
Mot. Letter - ETH Zurich - Masters in Data Science - regarding intro & narrative

4 - And to note, only the last three para `Why ETH` is polished by AI not the first three. Moreover,...

Letters cosmicmnk - Nov 20, 2025cosmicmnk - Nov 22, 2025
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MSc CYBERSECURITY

2 - What community is this? If it is your local community, you need to justify the risks by showing...

Letters kbomber - Nov 18, 2025Holt - Nov 19, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to master program in ESIEE Paris University

2 - The motivation letter of a masters degree course does not follow the same format as a college undergraduate presentation,...

Letters Miftaaj01 - Nov 12, 2025Holt - Nov 12, 2025
Letter master's Stipendium Hungaricum - Finance

2 - These are generic, run of the mill responses that could refer to your interest in any school. These...

Letters The_Paragon - Nov 8, 2025Holt - Nov 9, 2025
Motivational letter for IPCVAI

2 - Rather than repeating the course structure to the reviewer, who is already familiar with the program and does not...

Letters prabhat1 - Nov 6, 2025Holt - Nov 8, 2025
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - While the lack of pure quantitative experience is a major drawback for your application, the reviewer will gauge your...

Letters ctriver - Nov 5, 2025Holt - Nov 6, 2025
Motivational Letter for Erasmus RePIC Joint Masters Program / National Development Planning

2 - This is an inappropriate method of opening your motivational letter. You must maintain a professional and academic tone...

Letters Nadyaamd - Oct 31, 2025Holt - Oct 31, 2025

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