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AI in language learning and literature writing - Personal Statement for CLMC Erasmus Program

2 - This should go to the very top of the discussion. This is your personal motivation for studying the...

ScholarshipAshiaBibi - Nov 13, 2024 / Holt - Nov 14, 2024
Chemical Engineering - Academic objective and long range goal essay

2 - Actually, your response is incorrect in the sense that you speak of your long term goals, but not of...

ScholarshipMichaelllll - Nov 6, 2024 / Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Political landscape of Bosnia and Herzegovina - Chevening career plan

3 - You are writing only on UN women. I recomend you to put numerous goals and arrange them to implementation...

ScholarshipLohnpartner - Nov 4, 2024 / a_sm - Nov 5, 2024
CHEVENING: LEADERSHIP THROUGH EMPOWERMENT

2 - Remove all the references to your internship and college experience. Those paragraphs do not contain actual leadership discussions. The...

ScholarshipAsquare27 - Nov 5, 2024 / Holt - Nov 5, 2024
Motivation letter for EMJM Image Processing and Computer Vision AI - Review Request

2 - I do not get the vision that you have for pursuing the course which could have resulted in the...

Scholarshipmepawan7 - Nov 5, 2024 / Holt - Nov 5, 2024
Chevening Networking Essay - Wicked Problems

3 - @Holt Thank you...

Scholarshipryayra - Nov 3, 2024 / ryayra - Nov 4, 2024
Blue Economy (Product Owner) - Career Plan - Chevening Essay

2 - Delete the last paragraph. That is not part of the career plan. Those are areas of study that you...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024 / Holt - Nov 4, 2024
Get into Professional Networking (Product Owner) - Networking - Chevening Essay

2 - There is no reference to professional relationship building skills here. You are speaking of your student experience, but have...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024 / Holt - Nov 4, 2024
Inspiring, reliable and ambitious - Chevening leadership

5 - @lily411 I think the essay needs to have a redirect in the tone that would resonate with the admission...

Scholarshiplily411 - Nov 1, 2024 / woodg - Nov 4, 2024
Human Behavior - Stipendiary Hungarian Essay

4 - @molnardebora I agree with the comments. It is crucial to identify the problems and develop solutions....

Scholarshipmolnardebora - Oct 21, 2024 / woodg - Nov 4, 2024
Relationship-building in a professional capacity - Chevening

8 - 1. You need to show your Leadership and Influence skill on the professional level. 2. Use STAR Framework to...

Scholarshipabdulrahmanaahma - Oct 30, 2024 / essaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024
Biology, mathematics, and technology - academic objectives and your long-range goals

5 - You need to show the specific things university of Toronto had that would help you align with your Long-range...

Scholarshipnourmohamed_1 - Oct 20, 2024 / essaycheck24 - Nov 3, 2024
My Vision for AI in Ghana - Leadership and Influence Chevening

4 - Merged: Leadership and Influence Essay for Chevening - The greatest leader doesn't only do great things Prompt...

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 27, 2024 / ryayra - Nov 3, 2024
Chemical Engineering - If you are not awarded the Scholarship, what are your plans?

2 - Do not over reach with your response. Offer an explanation only for the plans as required should you not...

ScholarshipIlovecats365 - Nov 3, 2024 / Holt - Nov 3, 2024
The actions of humanity in polluting the earth - a reference letter for yourself describing yourself

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I gladly appreciate it...

ScholarshipAnamoRice - Nov 2, 2024 / AnamoRice - Nov 3, 2024
ERASMUS MUDUS SCHOLARSHIPS ON EUROPEAN PUBLIC HEALTH MASTER. Europubhealth+

2 - The requirement for the statement of purpose is that you have a desire to attend 2 universities instead of...

ScholarshipSolex4chew - Nov 2, 2024 / Holt - Nov 3, 2024
A young Bangladeshi Muslim woman - Chevening leaders or influencers

3 - The closing paragraph could be more impactful by briefly summarizing your vision for Bangladesh, particularly how you plan to...

ScholarshipNazifan - Oct 30, 2024 / jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
Empowering Innovation Through Connection: My Path to Chevening

3 - @Holt Thank you for your valuable suggestions and corrections. I have rewritten the essay based on your feedback, and...

Scholarshipjasminee - Nov 2, 2024 / jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
Navigating Leadership Challenges: A Journey of Growth in Biology Education and Research (Chevening)

2 - Your experience as a practicum coordinator does not reflect a potential for your growth as a future leader and...

Scholarshipjasminee - Nov 2, 2024 / Holt - Nov 2, 2024
Collaboration, service, and change - Chevening Leadership

5 - Yeah your eassy sounds good. The most important thing that you have maintained a natural tone of writing that...

ScholarshipElam - Nov 1, 2024 / milan123 - Nov 2, 2024
Nigeria and Doctors - CAREER GOALS; CHEVENING

2 - The reviewer will not be interested in reading the research paper that you have included in this essay. In...

Scholarshipfaisalidina - Nov 1, 2024 / Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening - Studying in the UK

3 - In all your conclusion, always try and reference Chevening and how the scholarship will aid you....

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / Chiedu_10 - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening-Career plan (Chevening is looking for individuals who have a clear post-study career plan)

2 - You have shown a tendency to overshare in all of your essays. You are not properly focused, nor actually...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Collaboration, building trust, and inspiring - Chevening Leadership and influence

3 - Nice essay But if you can use the STAR approach and show leadership skills beyond your schooling, that will...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / faisalidina - Nov 1, 2024
Chevening - Relationship building and shared learning

2 - Unfortunately your essay speaks of an internship, which should not be confused with a person performing a networking task...

Scholarshipfarrazmi - Nov 1, 2024 / Holt - Nov 1, 2024
Compliance/Internal Control Manager - Leadership and influence-Chevening

3 - thankyou for ur insight...

ScholarshipMelissa231 - Oct 31, 2024 / farrazmi - Nov 1, 2024
chevening relationship building and Shared learning

3 - thankyou for the insight...

ScholarshipOlowo3310 - Oct 26, 2024 / farrazmi - Nov 1, 2024
Mastercard Foundation Scholarship at the University of Edinburgh

5 - @alian Thank you very much for your contribution. I really appreciate it and I will heed to it. Thank...

ScholarshipShamsuddeen - Oct 21, 2024 / Shamsuddeen - Oct 31, 2024
Digital Transformation (Product Owner) - Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay

2 - This is a well developed leadership and influencing essay that shows how you are professionally leading changes within the...

Scholarshipessaycheck24 - Oct 31, 2024 / Holt - Oct 31, 2024
Career Plan Chevening - Creating an AI innovation centre for long term

2 - You have wrongly referenced the organization work in your country. It is not about what they could provide...

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Resilience, determination, and compassion - Application for Mastercard Scholarship

2 - Consider using more specific examples of the traits you mentioned. The way that you describe these in your essay...

ScholarshipMystro_Dynamic - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening - Leadership - Aspiring Sustainable Business Leader

2 - Show team leadership. A true leader works and develops these procedures in consultation with industry partners, team members,...

Scholarshiprngrtm - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
Study in the UK Essay for Chevening - Modules and Access to Research Labs

3 - @Holt Thank you so much Holt....

Scholarshipryayra - Oct 28, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Chevening: The Meaning of Leadership for An Entry-Level Employee

5 - @harepanther I think that this is pretty good (but I'm not that good of a writer). But one thing...

Scholarshipharepanther - Oct 21, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
UK government in Indonesia - Chevening about Career Plan

2 - You need to present a more specific timeline for the short and long term goals. Be very clear and...

Scholarshippuputfn - Oct 28, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship - Civil Engineering

2 - You sound more like you are applying for a college admission than a prestigious and extremely competitive technical student...

Scholarshipmilan123 - Oct 27, 2024 / Holt - Oct 28, 2024
"A project coordinator" - Chevening: Leadership and influence

2 - Chevening is looking for current community and prpfession based leaders who have the potential to develop into future...

Scholarshipjklk - Oct 27, 2024 / Holt - Oct 27, 2024
It's not about authority - chevening leadership and influencing skill

2 - Do not talk down to the reviewer. You are not being been seen in a good light with...

ScholarshipOlowo3310 - Oct 26, 2024 / Holt - Oct 27, 2024
Medical field and politics - Chevening leadership essay

2 - So, This is a leadership and influencing essay where you are asked to prove that you are a person...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 25, 2024 / Holt - Oct 26, 2024
"The quarantine" - Leadership and influencing Chevening

4 - You need to make your post more fluent and connected, don't talk about irrelevant life events, and focus on...

Scholarshipalian - Oct 25, 2024 / a_sm - Oct 25, 2024
SOP - Erasmus Mundus Joint Master in Managing Art & Cultural Heritage in Global Markets (MAGMa)

2 - It does not. You are not the the only applicant who will have this or a similar, or...

Scholarshipanujmahotraa - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
GKS-G - love for arts and vision

2 - If you are planning to enroll via the university track, then you should be writing a shorter draft of...

Scholarshipalmukhanbetova - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
Environment, Politics and Development - Leadership and influencing Chevening

3 - Try and shorten your sentences as there is too many uses of commas ','. This will make your work...

ScholarshipNing Jar Lawn - Oct 22, 2024 / Chiedu_10 - Oct 23, 2024
Msc Artificial Intelligence - Chevening Networking Essay Review

2 - There is a key phrase present in the writing guide that you have overlooked: The professional capacity means...

ScholarshipChiedu_10 - Oct 22, 2024 / Holt - Oct 23, 2024
Networks for positive impact - Chevening

2 - The essay does not prove that you are capable of building a professional network. The networking essay requires the...

Scholarshipa_sm - Oct 22, 2024 / Holt - Oct 22, 2024
The Art of Living - Master Program SoP

3 - I liked your essay. It is indeed a little long, but it does not bother me personally. If it...

Scholarshipvhl000 - Oct 16, 2024 / Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Challenging yourself outside of the comfort zone - Loran scholarship essay

2 - I believe that there is a lack of clarity when it comes to describing what your comfort zone is....

Scholarshipsholokha - Oct 15, 2024 / Holt - Oct 16, 2024
Mastercard Scholarship - Msc Public Policy Essay

3 - Thanks a lot for the feedback. I believe you have a point. How about this? Being a...

Scholarshipbadoe - Oct 14, 2024 / badoe - Oct 15, 2024
Most significant contribution to your school or extended communities - scholarship essay

3 - @Holt Ok, thank you so much for the feedback!...

Scholarshipandrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024 / andrshol15 - Oct 15, 2024
Become main front-end developer - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

3 - Hello, How can I contact you Holt? Please. See the email above for my private (paid) consultations (ie....

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024 / elizabeth1991 - Oct 12, 2024
Managing the internship program - CHEVENING - LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE SKILLS

5 - hello, I think you need to highlight your impact on what you contributed when you led the intern...

Scholarshiptrisyafahira - Sep 15, 2024 / habib_baharuddin - Oct 11, 2024
Non commmunicable diseases - commonwealth masters scholarship statement

3 - You've effectively highlighted the global prevalence of NCDs. Consider briefly mentioning the socioeconomic factors that contribute to this crisis...

ScholarshipWandi - Oct 6, 2024 / Nandia20060709 - Oct 11, 2024
Career Development and Coaching Studies MA - Leadership and Influence Chevening

2 - Show it, do not say it. This sentence makes you sound so unprofessional. It is like a high...

Scholarshipbiamendes - Oct 5, 2024 / Holt - Oct 10, 2024
Commonwealth Masters Scholarship Pharmacology and Drug Discovery MSc

3 - Thank you so much for taking your time to review my essay....

ScholarshipDambaniDeborah - Oct 2, 2024 / DambaniDeborah - Oct 3, 2024
Experience as an exchange Erasmus student - Chevening essay on Leadership and Influence

2 - Your presentation is dull and not interesting. So you were an EM scholar in the past. So what? There...

Scholarshipabunwer61 - Oct 1, 2024 / Holt - Oct 2, 2024
Development Impact Part 1- Cybersecurity / Commonwealth Scholarship

2 - For the global part of the essay, try to find a more specific cybersecurity threat that you feel will...

Scholarshipjitu_kamaliza - Sep 25, 2024 / Holt - Sep 26, 2024
Ensuring healthy lives of people - Chevening essay on career plan

2 - The main consideration for this essay should be how you will assist the DFID in their healthcare programs related...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 24, 2024 / Holt - Sep 25, 2024
Health and Public service - why you have selected your chosen three university courses

2 - The essay is direct to the point and presents the barest reasons for your choice of university. It is...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024 / Holt - Sep 24, 2024
Qualities of survival - Chevening leaders or influencers in their home country

2 - Influence is a part of leadership qualities, but is not applicable to this prompt. Rather, influence is something that...

Scholarshipseeeed - Sep 23, 2024 / Holt - Sep 24, 2024
TripWithCommunity / Tourism - Chevening leadership and influence

3 - Thank you very much for this feedback and I will improve it....

ScholarshipMiranass58 - Sep 22, 2024 / Miranass58 - Sep 23, 2024

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