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Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to recommend Mr. _____ for admission to your university. I have known ______ personally for more than 3 years, and since June 2011 he has been employed as an assistant at the ____ Auditorium of Arts Center, _______ University.
Serving at the ______ Auditorium, he was responsible for the light control and sound control in the control room, and he also played a role as house manager, according to the cases to shift the ordering tasks. Arts Center provided many different fields of missions, including speeches, film screenings, band lives, dramas, dances and concerts. He was very familiar with the requirements about these forms of activities.
______ could manage each condition very well during the time he worked for the auditorium. He had proved to have the abilities of organization and keeping a good communication between staff and performers. The service provided by him for the both audiences and performers was unparalleled, with keen and modest, he held his work to a high achievement.
Mr. ______ is an outstanding individual with strong motivation. With the passion toward performance arts, he attended many workshops held by our organization. I still remembered his prominent appearance of Beijing Opera show, from an apprentice to a man standing on the stage, over one semester's training. ______ showed the firm enthusiasm for learning the unfamiliar by enlisting these multifaceted fields of art activities.
His ambition for what he can engage in is what makes him such an exceptional student. He caught all the opportunities around him to pursue his goal, exerting the talents of administration and communication in arts field. I support his application for admission without reservation, and would appreciate any assistance you can offer him.
Best regards,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to recommend Mr. _____ for admission to your university. I have known ______ personally for more than 3 years, and since June 2011 he has been employed as an assistant at the ____ Auditorium of Arts Center, _______ University.
Serving at the ______ Auditorium, he was responsible for the light control and sound control in the control room, and he also played a role as house manager, according to the cases to shift the ordering tasks. Arts Center provided many different fields of missions, including speeches, film screenings, band lives, dramas, dances and concerts. He was very familiar with the requirements about these forms of activities.
______ could manage each condition very well during the time he worked for the auditorium. He had proved to have the abilities of organization and keeping a good communication between staff and performers. The service provided by him for the both audiences and performers was unparalleled, with keen and modest, he held his work to a high achievement.
Mr. ______ is an outstanding individual with strong motivation. With the passion toward performance arts, he attended many workshops held by our organization. I still remembered his prominent appearance of Beijing Opera show, from an apprentice to a man standing on the stage, over one semester's training. ______ showed the firm enthusiasm for learning the unfamiliar by enlisting these multifaceted fields of art activities.
His ambition for what he can engage in is what makes him such an exceptional student. He caught all the opportunities around him to pursue his goal, exerting the talents of administration and communication in arts field. I support his application for admission without reservation, and would appreciate any assistance you can offer him.
Best regards,