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Letter of recommendation - Master Program

kikiliyik 12 / 35 2  
Apr 13, 2014   #1
Dear all, I need you suggestion to repair my letter of recommendation that will be signed by my lecturer. please...thank you

I am one of the professors in Civil Engineering Department, University of XX. I am very happy, to write this recommendation for further studies MissXXX. I first met Miss XXX in my class-Concrete Structures. She showed excellent performance in this class. She was always be the first person who understand and done very well every assignment that I gave. She is an active student, she took initiative in her work and was highly regarded in the discussion group. For these reason I gave her grade A in this class. She also took my bridge class, compare to the class average, Miss XXX earned grade A in the class.

She has good manner and warm personality. She always helped her low intelligent friend to make them understand topic of subject in every discussion and course.

I highly recommend her to be a New Zealand ASEAN Scholars Award recipient. I am sure that she will be a postgraduate student whose great talents as engineer in the future.
Eisha khan - / 2  
Apr 13, 2014   #2
If you are writing to the teacher who may or may not know you well enough so you may write dear sir and at the yours sincerely
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Apr 13, 2014   #3
It is with great pleasure I recommend kikiliyik for the ???? Program ( title of the program). I have known her for ???? years as the Head of Civil Engineering faculty of ??? University from where she obtained her bachelors in Civil Engineering. I also was the supervisor for her projects ????? (mention the projects) and that gave me an opportunity to know her potential and capacity better.
OP kikiliyik 12 / 35 2  
Apr 13, 2014   #4
thank you very much, but I think if I add his greatness in recommend me so I have to omit his greatness in the last part, is it true?
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Apr 13, 2014   #5
... Well, there is no harm in recommending you again. In the last part, you can get him to re-instate his recommendation. For example;

I strongly believe that the proposed Masters program would benefit kikiliyik both personally and professionally. Based on here credentials, skills and ambition, I strongly recommend her as a candidate with lots of potential for this program.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 14, 2014   #6
Every person can say s/he is of great and strong motivate, good personality, leadership and ability to cooperate in a work-team. However, the way the above extract is written tends to indicate that the recommended student is none of these things.

Possible solution:A better approach is more likely to use very short stories, to show the readers the recommended student good qualities,
OP kikiliyik 12 / 35 2  
Apr 15, 2014   #7
if you don't mind, can you give me an example story that can impress the reader. thank you
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
Apr 15, 2014   #8
can you give me an example story that can impress the reader

EF provides you thousand samples of stories. Go get your own search, dear :D

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