Hi, i am taking my english carrer course, and now time to summit all my final work.. Here i post some of my initial work, could anyone help me check this out?
p/s i think my resume is still quite short, anything i can add in? by the way, i am INACTIVE in other curricular activities.
thanks
Cover letter:
John
103 Ground floor, Jalan Sultan Ismail,
20000, Kuala Terengganu,
Terengganu Darul Iman.
Landart Design Penang Pte Ltd
No. 42, Jalan Chow Thye,
10050 Penang.
Dear ,
APPLICATION FOR TRAINEE POSITION OF MECHANICAL ENGINEER
I wish to apply the above-mentioned position in your company to fulfill practical training requirement by the university. The duration of the training is about 8 weeks starting from the end of April 2010.
2. As I am still in the process of learning, this practical training will be a great opportunity for me to gain knowledge and experiences for myself in the field of mechanical engineering by exposing myself to the real situation that required knowledge and experience which I have to face in the future time. Besides, I am able to maintain a good grade point (GPA) of 3.71, which is first class in the course. Altogether, this makes me an ideal candidate for this internship position.
3. Currently, I am enrolled in the 3rd year of Bachelor in Mechanical Engineering course at main campus of Universiti Teknologi Malaysia, Skudai, and I will be graduating on the May of 2011. This course has enabled me to know more about what a machine system is and how it work etc. Besides, i also successfully undergone some minor project during this 3 years. All this experience which i think is enough for me to prepare myself for this internship in your company.
4. Enclosed please find a current copy of my resume. If you should have any questions regarding how my skills fit in your organization, feel free to give me a call at 018-1234567. I may also be reached by E-mail at John@siswa.utm.my. Thank you for considering me for this position. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
______________________
John
John
103, Ground Floor, Jalan Sultan Ismail,
20000, Kuala Terengganu,
Terengganu DI.
Tel : 018-1234567
PEROSONAL PARTICULARS
NRIC : 345632-23-2343 Gender - male
Age : 22
EDUCATION
2007 - Current UNIVERSITI TEKNOLOGI MALAYSIA, Skudai
Bachelor of Mechanical Engineering (Mechanical)
Graduation Date: May, 2011 G.P.A. 3.71/4.00 (Current)
2006 - 2007 KOLEJ MATRIKULASI PAHANG, Gambang
Physical science stream
Graduation Date: April, 2007 G.P.A. 4.00/4.00
2001 - 2005 SEKOLAH MENENGAH KEBANGSAAN CHUNG HWA WEI SIN, Kuala Terengganu
Science stream, SPM 2005 - 8A, PMR 2003 - 7A
EXPERIENCE
OCT 2003 Computech Sdn. Bhd.
Part Time Computer Technician
Handled customer complaint (Walk-in and telephones)
Handled computer project for organization
OCT 2004 Namin Eletrical CO
Part Time Electrical Appliance Technician
Handled customer complaint (Walk-in and outdoors)
In charge with Audio/Video Appliance services
MAY 2008 Universiti Teknologi Malaysia
Successfully undergo engineering workshop with consists of the following module:
a) Lathing b)Milling
c)Boiler d)Welding
e)CAD/CAM f)Computer Maintenance
g)CNC Milling h)Rapid prototype
i)Composite j)Metrology
k)Instrumentation l)Safety
m)Tooling n)Sample preparation
o)Hydraulic and pneumatic p)Auto transmission
q)Sheet metal forming r)Grinding
s)Drilling t)Engineering professional practice
ACTIVITIES
SEKOLAH MENENGAH KEBANGSAAN CHUNG HWA WEI SIN, Kuala Terengganu
Member of football association, Mathematic club, and Scout
FEB 2001 Participate in membership camp for scouting team
Successfully been honored as 2nd overall pick patrol leader
JUL 2002 Elected as assistant coordinator for mathematic week for school level
Successfully achieved most attendance record in history
MAC 2003 Participate in the sports day football competition
Finish 4th overall in SMR category in the Jogathon competition
JUN 2003 Take part in the JAMBOREE Camp in Thailand
APR 2004 Organized CHWS Futsal Open 2004
MAC 2005 Participate in sports day parade
KOLEJ MATRIKULASI PAHANG, Gambang
Member of badminton club
DEC 2006 Participate in badminton competition
MAC 2007 Participate in football competition in college level
SKILLS AND STRENGTHS
Language Proficiency
Able to listen, speak and read in Chinese, English, Malay
Computer Skills
Microsoft Windows 98, 2K, XP, Vista
Microsoft office 2000, 2003, 2007
Autodesk AUTOCAD 2007, MathCAD MATLAB, FORTRAN
Miscellaneous Skills
Work systematically under pressure with minimal supervision
Communicate with all levels and ranks of people
Able to cooperate and to lead the group
Able to generate new ideas and quickly solve problems
HOBBY / INTERESTS
Computer software programming and hardware
Technology in latest gadgets and products
Electronic and mechanical machines
Surfing the net, playing computer games
p/s i think my resume is still quite short, anything i can add in? by the way, i am INACTIVE in other curricular activities.
thanks
Cover letter:
John
103 Ground floor, Jalan Sultan Ismail,
20000, Kuala Terengganu,
Terengganu Darul Iman.
Landart Design Penang Pte Ltd
No. 42, Jalan Chow Thye,
10050 Penang.
Dear ,
APPLICATION FOR TRAINEE POSITION OF MECHANICAL ENGINEER
I wish to apply the above-mentioned position in your company to fulfill practical training requirement by the university. The duration of the training is about 8 weeks starting from the end of April 2010.
2. As I am still in the process of learning, this practical training will be a great opportunity for me to gain knowledge and experiences for myself in the field of mechanical engineering by exposing myself to the real situation that required knowledge and experience which I have to face in the future time. Besides, I am able to maintain a good grade point (GPA) of 3.71, which is first class in the course. Altogether, this makes me an ideal candidate for this internship position.
3. Currently, I am enrolled in the 3rd year of Bachelor in Mechanical Engineering course at main campus of Universiti Teknologi Malaysia, Skudai, and I will be graduating on the May of 2011. This course has enabled me to know more about what a machine system is and how it work etc. Besides, i also successfully undergone some minor project during this 3 years. All this experience which i think is enough for me to prepare myself for this internship in your company.
4. Enclosed please find a current copy of my resume. If you should have any questions regarding how my skills fit in your organization, feel free to give me a call at 018-1234567. I may also be reached by E-mail at John@siswa.utm.my. Thank you for considering me for this position. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
______________________
John
John
103, Ground Floor, Jalan Sultan Ismail,
20000, Kuala Terengganu,
Terengganu DI.
Tel : 018-1234567
PEROSONAL PARTICULARS
NRIC : 345632-23-2343 Gender - male
Age : 22
EDUCATION
2007 - Current UNIVERSITI TEKNOLOGI MALAYSIA, Skudai
Bachelor of Mechanical Engineering (Mechanical)
Graduation Date: May, 2011 G.P.A. 3.71/4.00 (Current)
2006 - 2007 KOLEJ MATRIKULASI PAHANG, Gambang
Physical science stream
Graduation Date: April, 2007 G.P.A. 4.00/4.00
2001 - 2005 SEKOLAH MENENGAH KEBANGSAAN CHUNG HWA WEI SIN, Kuala Terengganu
Science stream, SPM 2005 - 8A, PMR 2003 - 7A
EXPERIENCE
OCT 2003 Computech Sdn. Bhd.
Part Time Computer Technician
Handled customer complaint (Walk-in and telephones)
Handled computer project for organization
OCT 2004 Namin Eletrical CO
Part Time Electrical Appliance Technician
Handled customer complaint (Walk-in and outdoors)
In charge with Audio/Video Appliance services
MAY 2008 Universiti Teknologi Malaysia
Successfully undergo engineering workshop with consists of the following module:
a) Lathing b)Milling
c)Boiler d)Welding
e)CAD/CAM f)Computer Maintenance
g)CNC Milling h)Rapid prototype
i)Composite j)Metrology
k)Instrumentation l)Safety
m)Tooling n)Sample preparation
o)Hydraulic and pneumatic p)Auto transmission
q)Sheet metal forming r)Grinding
s)Drilling t)Engineering professional practice
ACTIVITIES
SEKOLAH MENENGAH KEBANGSAAN CHUNG HWA WEI SIN, Kuala Terengganu
Member of football association, Mathematic club, and Scout
FEB 2001 Participate in membership camp for scouting team
Successfully been honored as 2nd overall pick patrol leader
JUL 2002 Elected as assistant coordinator for mathematic week for school level
Successfully achieved most attendance record in history
MAC 2003 Participate in the sports day football competition
Finish 4th overall in SMR category in the Jogathon competition
JUN 2003 Take part in the JAMBOREE Camp in Thailand
APR 2004 Organized CHWS Futsal Open 2004
MAC 2005 Participate in sports day parade
KOLEJ MATRIKULASI PAHANG, Gambang
Member of badminton club
DEC 2006 Participate in badminton competition
MAC 2007 Participate in football competition in college level
SKILLS AND STRENGTHS
Language Proficiency
Able to listen, speak and read in Chinese, English, Malay
Computer Skills
Microsoft Windows 98, 2K, XP, Vista
Microsoft office 2000, 2003, 2007
Autodesk AUTOCAD 2007, MathCAD MATLAB, FORTRAN
Miscellaneous Skills
Work systematically under pressure with minimal supervision
Communicate with all levels and ranks of people
Able to cooperate and to lead the group
Able to generate new ideas and quickly solve problems
HOBBY / INTERESTS
Computer software programming and hardware
Technology in latest gadgets and products
Electronic and mechanical machines
Surfing the net, playing computer games