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Letter of Excuse for absence



KBMSmile 1 / 2  
Jul 5, 2013   #1
My english teacher challenge me to do this letter of excuse written by a student. What does he really want to say? I wonder if you could help me to correct it the wrong words. Thank you very much! i'll wait for your answer :)

Dear Maam,
Sorry for my long absence. I like absent on February 9-11 because February 9 is 40 days in my uncle THAT Dead and February 12. in the morning my mother demanded me for buy of fruit on store. im ride in motor but im not know that the driver is drunkard. the motor is clash on stone. that reason im fly away. im okay because im fly away to many leaves but my back and finger is not okay. because painful and not move everyday very painful my body.

sorry here!

hcarver 1 / 2  
Jul 5, 2013   #2
KBMSmile

I'm not exactly sure what you are asking, but I will try my best at correcting your letter.

Dear Ma'am , Use the woman's name instead of Ma'am. For example Mrs. Example
I apologize for my long absence. I was absent fromFebruary 9-11 due to family issues and an automobile accident that I was involved in.I look forward to being present in your class in the future.

Thanks for your understanding.
Sincerely,

Your name
Pahan 1 / 1824  
Jul 5, 2013   #3
Dear Maam,
Sorry for my long absence. I like absent on February 9-11 because February 9 is 40 days in my uncle THAT Dead and February 12. in the morning my mother demanded me for buy of fruit on store. im ride in motor but im not know that the driver is drunkard. the motor is clash on stone. that reason im fly away. im okay because im fly away to many leaves but my back and finger is not okay. because painful and not move everyday very painful my body.
sorry here!

You can write either "Dear Madam" or " Dear Ms ????(her name)"
I have a few things to get clarified before I help you;
How many days you were absent?
Why you mention about your uncle?
Did you see a doctor after meeting the accident? (If so, you can mention that you have a medical certificate to prove you were sick or injured)

I will certainly help you with this note, if you can answer the above for me to figure out the real picture. ... :)
OP KBMSmile 1 / 2  
Jul 6, 2013   #4
thank you :) for helping me
my english teacher said that, rewrite the letter of excuse written by a student.
Pahan 1 / 1824  
Jul 7, 2013   #5
Okkkkkkkk.... let see how I can help you;

Dear Maam,
Sorry for my long absence. I like absent on February 9-11 because February 9 is 40 days in my uncle THAT Dead and February 12. in the morning my mother demanded me for buy of fruit on store. im ride in motor but im not know that the driver is drunkard. the motor is clash on stone. that reason im fly away. im okay because im fly away to many leaves but my back and finger is not okay. because painful and not move everyday very painful my body.
sorry here!

Dear Madam,
I humbly request you to apologize my absence from ?????(have the duration of your absence here e.g. 9th to 11th February). The reason for my absence from 9th to 11th February is due to attending my uncles 40th day death anniversary. However on the 12th February I met with a motorcar accident and I suffered injuries. This is the reason for being absent from 12th February to ????. Please consider these reasons and kindly excuse my absence in class.


Fill in the places with ????? appropriately.
Hope this helps :)
OP KBMSmile 1 / 2  
Jul 7, 2013   #6
oh thank you so much . its such a beautiful answer.


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