Letter to Canadian embassyHello everyone! I've just finished writing my letter to Canadian embassy and would like to hear some feedback on it. Is there anything I should add or remove from it?
To whom it may concern,
My name is Kyrylo Lvov. I wish to apply for a study permit. I am currently finishing High School in Ukraine. I was accepted to Humber College for Fall 2020 Advanced Diploma program. I will be studying Computer Engineering Technology for three years.
It has always been my dream to study abroad and after visiting a few conferences about studying overseas, I chose Canada to look for a college, thanks to its multi-cultural society and quality of education. Ukraine is a developing country and we are expecting a rise in the demand for programmers for the next few years. By learning Computer Engineering in an already developed country I can guaranteed to have the latest knowledge to be on the front when I return to Ukraine.
The reason I chose Humber College Institute of Technology and Advanced Learning was the fact that this college provides excellent advanced education for in demand professions. Additionally, Canada occupies second place in education, has the reputation for having the friendliest people and was ranked the safest place in the world. It was at Canada studying conference that I was introduced to Humber College. After a brief discussion with the university's representative, I decided that I would apply for an Advanced Diploma at this college.
My father is paying my tuition fees and my living expense as well. I was told that international students studying at Canada can work part-time at twenty hours per week, so I'm planning to work and save some money for my needs. Throughout the studying process I will be living at a homestay with a Canadian family as I haven't reached age of majority yet.
My plan is to finish my Advanced Diploma in Canada and return back to Ukraine and start my career in Software Development. In addition to that, the need for developers rises worldwide and many companies around the world are seeking for professional developers in East Europe. With Canadian higher education, I can almost guarantee to acquire a well-paid job in the first month that I return home and work for the benefit of my country.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application,