My good academic record and motivation make me a strong recommendation for a place at this program.

Dear Sir/Madam,
With this letter I hereby would like to express my motivation for a PhD programme in geology offered by your University.
Many scholarships were offered for Syrian students but your programme is the only programme which full coverage for my major in one of the most important University in the world.

With a major in geophysics studies as an undergraduate, and Master in geophysics I would now like to concentrate on studying structural geology by interpretation geophysical data and satellite imagery. I am particularly interested in Arabian plate movement, Ghab depression, Palmyride anticline.

The use of gravity and magnetic methods in studying structural setting of northern Ghab Area became the subject for my essay which accepted in 22th October 2014 in Damascus university journal for basic science and it will publication soon.

In my studies toward a PhD degree, I wish to Construct the structural model for northern Palmyride in Syria based on geophysical interpretations and satellite imagery. Because there have isnot an integrated visualization of past and future of the Palmyride tectonic movements as a part of Arabian plate.

I have been working in many geological and geophysical studies in my present and previous work and get good experience in geological and tectonic of Syria and using geological, geophysics, satellite imagery, and geographic information system programs. Which will help me in Implementation my PhD plan.

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Hello,
This essay was well written overall. You had great organization and good enthusiasm. I made some technical edits for you, but please review again and make sure all the grammatical mistakes are corrected.

Dear Sir/MadamTo Whom It May Concern, ,
With this letter, I hereby would like to express my motivation for ato participate in a PhD programme in geology offered by your University.
Many scholarships were offered for Syrian students but your programme is the only programme which full coverage for my major in one of the most important University in the world.I would not mention this in your essay. This topic is not appropriate for this type of essay

With a major in geophysics studies as an undergraduateBA in geophysics , and Masters in geophysics, I would now like to concentrate on studying structural geology by interpretation geophysical data and satellite imagery. I am particularly interested in Arabian plate movement, Ghab depression, and Palmyride anticline.

The use of gravity and magnetic methods in studying structural setting of northern Ghab Area became the subject for my essay which accepted in 22th October 2014 in Damascus university journal for basic science and it will publicationbe published soon.

In my studies towardfor a PhD degree, I wish to Construct the structural model for northern Palmyride in Syria based on geophysical interpretations and satellite imagery. Because there haveis not an integrated visualization of past and future of the Palmyride tectonic movements as a part of Arabian plate.

I have been working in many geological and geophysical studies in my present and previous work and get good experience in geological and tectonic of Syria and using geological, geophysics, satellite imagery, and geographic information system programs. Which will help me in Implementation my PhD plan.

Inone the other hand, I have been worked in many general organizations in last 10 years as a geophysicist and as ain the head of documentation department in last two years, so I have very good experience in networking with other external actors and very good experience in data management. with good experience in train others because I worked as a teacher in Damascus university for 3 years.

I visited your university website and findfound that there are many professors on school of geology have most important geological and geophysical researches in the world, and it's my opportunity to get my dream. I would like to say that I am eager to gain new experiences, improve my skills, and I am persuaded that studying in your PHD program would contribute to my development as a specialist of international level in the best possible way.

In a few years, I see myself teaching geophysics in one of Syrian universities and one of petroleum section leaders in Syria. PhD program offered by your scholarship would be valuable to me in several ways. First, your teaching assistantship program would provide me with the practical experience I am eager to acquire. Further, earning a Ph.D. in Geophysics would support my other career goals by adding to my creative skills, in my technical work. Ultimately, however, I see the Ph.D. as an end in itself, as well as a professional milestone; I enjoy studying geophysics for its own sake and would like to continue my studies on the level demanded by the Ph.D. program.

To my knowledge, this program is very competitive, attracting highly motivated students, but I am convinced that my good academic record and my motivation make me a strong recommendation for a place at it. I would be honored if you decide to accept my candidateship to be Ph.D. student at your Universities.[/quote]