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ICT Help desk Team Leader - Motivation for Applying for an Australia Awards Scholarship



jasirias13 1 / 1  
Apr 1, 2025   #1
I choose Australia Awards Scholarship because I see there is a demanding need in my line of work as an ICT Help desk Team Leader in my organization. I am eager to expand my knowledge based in terms of User Experience professional.
I want to enhance my knowledge and skills in Master of Information Technology majoring in IT Management so after when I returned, I will be able to manage IT requests in terms of leading my team, managing service delivery operations and provide technical expertise and infrastructure properly in this higher learning institution, Divine Word University.
This course will significantly enhance my knowledge in Human-Centred Design of IT Systems which is an approach in developing interactive technology that is designed by working collaboratively with end users and organisations to understand their need and contexts, define the problem, develop technology ideas and prototypes , and evaluate them. Also, Advance Business Analysis focuses on building problem solving ability, analytical and communication skills, and technical capabilities are crucial for my development. I plan to apply the skills I learn to improve my job performance and lead projects more effectively. Additionally, I look forward to collaborating with peers, which will help me build a professional network to enhance my teamwork skills. Overall, this course is a vital step toward achieving my career goals and becoming a more competent User Experience Professional.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15603  
Apr 1, 2025   #2
I understand that your desire to study an advanced degree in Australia is honest and something you consider important to your future. However, your personal statement is too simplistic and does not prove any reason why you need to go to Australia to study when you can study a similar course or the same course in your home country. The reason why you want to study in Australia is not a stand out topic. It is so simple that it can actually be overlooked by the reviewer. The experience that you present, the need of your organization, your excitement about studying in Australia, these are all one dimensional reasons that do not really help to boost your consideration as a potential AAS awardee.
OP jasirias13 1 / 1  
Apr 1, 2025   #3
@Holt
Thank you for the feedback , I will take into consideration.


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