Introduction of the position;
MLC Language Centre is an established English language school located in Shatin. We offer comprehensive English courses to young children aged 3 - 14. Our interactive and systematic approach has been proven successfully to accelerate children's English ability and confidence, as well as to develop their interest and potential in using English as their second language.
Executive Summary for resume
MLC Summer Course Helper sounds quite intriguing to me. As you know, I have no working experience at all as a seventeenth years old, so I am extremely eager to begin my very first career in lifetime so bad, even just for a short term. At the aged of 15, I went to U.S. in order to continue my academic career alone. The international diversity allows international students like me to further improve their foreign language communication skill as well as social skills. Therefore, I am quite confident that I am well qualified with the position that you have listed on JobsDB in terms of English communication skills. People might say a seventeenth years old are not mutual enough to look after children. Nevertheless, I can tell that is absolutely not true! I had never ever thought of living with children until I met my amazing host family- Carrington family. They are not my first host family, but they are the first one I met to have children in the family. Their children Malena and Christian are 5 years old and 7 years old respectively. They are super adorable, of course, sometime annoying in a lovely way. Through the two years of sharing our life and time together, I learned how to live with children and different people in a harmonious way. Furthermore, I also have had volunteering at the local church to take care children from different age, nation and personality! I am not a champion in social skills, but I do love the time I have with children because of how fun it is!
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MLC Language Centre is an established English language school located in Shatin. We offer comprehensive English courses to young children aged 3 - 14. Our interactive and systematic approach has been proven successfully to accelerate children's English ability and confidence, as well as to develop their interest and potential in using English as their second language.
Executive Summary for resume
MLC Summer Course Helper sounds quite intriguing to me. As you know, I have no working experience at all as a seventeenth years old, so I am extremely eager to begin my very first career in lifetime so bad, even just for a short term. At the aged of 15, I went to U.S. in order to continue my academic career alone. The international diversity allows international students like me to further improve their foreign language communication skill as well as social skills. Therefore, I am quite confident that I am well qualified with the position that you have listed on JobsDB in terms of English communication skills. People might say a seventeenth years old are not mutual enough to look after children. Nevertheless, I can tell that is absolutely not true! I had never ever thought of living with children until I met my amazing host family- Carrington family. They are not my first host family, but they are the first one I met to have children in the family. Their children Malena and Christian are 5 years old and 7 years old respectively. They are super adorable, of course, sometime annoying in a lovely way. Through the two years of sharing our life and time together, I learned how to live with children and different people in a harmonious way. Furthermore, I also have had volunteering at the local church to take care children from different age, nation and personality! I am not a champion in social skills, but I do love the time I have with children because of how fun it is!
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I just finished typing the summary real quick, so I expect there are lots of error. But I would like to hear some advises for improvement.
Thank You