Hi again everyone, I would appreciate your feedback on my Motivation Letter for the Erasmus Mundus Master Impact Entrepreneurship programme. The requirement is a one-page limit, so I'm trying to make it concise while keeping the key elements clear. Any suggestions on clarity, structure, or tone would be very helpful.
Thank you
Dear Admissions Committee,
Having a strong passion for technology and entrepreneurship, I founded a startup named Gudang Karier Indonesia, a digital recruitment platform connecting job seekers to credible MSME industries. My commitment is tailored to employment challenges of senior high school and vocational school graduates, who often struggle to match their skills with job opportunities. The Erasmus Mundus Master in Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE) program aligns perfectly with my ambition to further develop an inclusive and innovative employment platform and contribute to SDG 8: decent work and economic growth.
During my bachelor's studies, I focused on building Gudang Karier Indonesia into a recruitment ecosystem on our website and online community. This gave me a deep understanding of startup complexities and honed my analytical thinking and problem solving skills. Managing the startup with a small team, I recognize that driving business growth requires profound knowledge in business innovation and entrepreneurship, giving me the confidence to pursue EMMIE to create meaningful social impact.
Besides, I also mentored local MSMEs in the SiBakul Jogja community in business strategy and operational management. Assisting entrepreneurs to optimize their operations reinforced my belief that learning at a global level will enhance my ability to mentor, innovate, and scale social companies both in MSME and its community.
Studying a Master's in Impact Entrepreneurship is the best fit with my academic and professional objectives. I found the program structures stand out with the managerial techniques, social and sustainable business innovations, and impact entrepreneurship courses which are crucial for me in creating innovative and sustainable digital startup companies. The opportunity for collaborative entrepreneurial projects and seminars offers direct learning through pitching to business experts and potential investors. Learning in different countries such as Croatia, Lithuania, and Belgium also provides a unique chance for me to live multicultural experiences while growing in a professional environment.
My future career focuses on the development of Gudang Karier Indonesia to be the number one talent platform in Indonesia. With that in mind, I would aspire to create partnerships or agreements with several companies so that the young job seekers can secure appropriate jobs after graduation. In the long term, I plan to contribute to government programs as a mentor and advisor, especially in areas related to IT and workforce development.
I thoroughly believe that taking the Master's in Impact Entrepreneurship program will spark my future career as an excellent entrepreneur. Developing my capabilities in entrepreneurial and academic dedication enables me to contribute meaningfully to the economic growth in Indonesia. I sincerely hope for the opportunity to join EMMIE and participate in its dynamic academic community.
Sincerely
Thank you
Dear Admissions Committee,
Having a strong passion for technology and entrepreneurship, I founded a startup named Gudang Karier Indonesia, a digital recruitment platform connecting job seekers to credible MSME industries. My commitment is tailored to employment challenges of senior high school and vocational school graduates, who often struggle to match their skills with job opportunities. The Erasmus Mundus Master in Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE) program aligns perfectly with my ambition to further develop an inclusive and innovative employment platform and contribute to SDG 8: decent work and economic growth.
During my bachelor's studies, I focused on building Gudang Karier Indonesia into a recruitment ecosystem on our website and online community. This gave me a deep understanding of startup complexities and honed my analytical thinking and problem solving skills. Managing the startup with a small team, I recognize that driving business growth requires profound knowledge in business innovation and entrepreneurship, giving me the confidence to pursue EMMIE to create meaningful social impact.
Besides, I also mentored local MSMEs in the SiBakul Jogja community in business strategy and operational management. Assisting entrepreneurs to optimize their operations reinforced my belief that learning at a global level will enhance my ability to mentor, innovate, and scale social companies both in MSME and its community.
Studying a Master's in Impact Entrepreneurship is the best fit with my academic and professional objectives. I found the program structures stand out with the managerial techniques, social and sustainable business innovations, and impact entrepreneurship courses which are crucial for me in creating innovative and sustainable digital startup companies. The opportunity for collaborative entrepreneurial projects and seminars offers direct learning through pitching to business experts and potential investors. Learning in different countries such as Croatia, Lithuania, and Belgium also provides a unique chance for me to live multicultural experiences while growing in a professional environment.
My future career focuses on the development of Gudang Karier Indonesia to be the number one talent platform in Indonesia. With that in mind, I would aspire to create partnerships or agreements with several companies so that the young job seekers can secure appropriate jobs after graduation. In the long term, I plan to contribute to government programs as a mentor and advisor, especially in areas related to IT and workforce development.
I thoroughly believe that taking the Master's in Impact Entrepreneurship program will spark my future career as an excellent entrepreneur. Developing my capabilities in entrepreneurial and academic dedication enables me to contribute meaningfully to the economic growth in Indonesia. I sincerely hope for the opportunity to join EMMIE and participate in its dynamic academic community.
Sincerely
