You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
explain what you like bout the cafeteria
say what is wrong
suggest how it could be improved
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student who regularly comes to your cafeteria for lunch. I am writing to you for providing some suggestions that I think would benefit your profits.
At first, I would like to admit the several advantages of your dining place. Firstly, the Seaview hanging on the wall definitely makes your place felt spacious and attractive. Secondly, the gentle and slight music absolutely keeps us a good mood having meals.
Although the above advantages exist in your place, some disadvantages are urgently expected to be enhanced. First of all, as you know, we are all students who can not afford the expensive dishes. However, the price of the meals hikes in recent months. I hope you can keep the price stay low. Moreover, there is always only one queue for meals, it is very often that we spend about twenty minutes queuing for meals, which really takes us so much time before we proceed the classes happened in the afternoon.
Please give me a prompt reply at your most convenience. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Williams.
explain what you like bout the cafeteria
say what is wrong
suggest how it could be improved
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Pointing out good and weak points of a college lunchroom
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student who regularly comes to your cafeteria for lunch. I am writing to you for providing some suggestions that I think would benefit your profits.
At first, I would like to admit the several advantages of your dining place. Firstly, the Seaview hanging on the wall definitely makes your place felt spacious and attractive. Secondly, the gentle and slight music absolutely keeps us a good mood having meals.
Although the above advantages exist in your place, some disadvantages are urgently expected to be enhanced. First of all, as you know, we are all students who can not afford the expensive dishes. However, the price of the meals hikes in recent months. I hope you can keep the price stay low. Moreover, there is always only one queue for meals, it is very often that we spend about twenty minutes queuing for meals, which really takes us so much time before we proceed the classes happened in the afternoon.
Please give me a prompt reply at your most convenience. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Williams.
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