Letter of recommendation - Master Program

Dear all, I need you suggestion to repair my letter of recommendation that will be signed by my lecturer. please...thank you

I am one of the professors in Civil Engineering Department, University of XX. I am very happy, to write this recommendation for further studies MissXXX. I first met Miss XXX in my class-Concrete Structures. She showed excellent performance in this class. She was always be the first person who understand and done very well every assignment that I gave. She is an active student, she took initiative in her work and was highly regarded in the discussion group. For these reason I gave her grade A in this class. She also took my bridge class, compare to the class average, Miss XXX earned grade A in the class.

She has good manner and warm personality. She always helped her low intelligent friend to make them understand topic of subject in every discussion and course.

I highly recommend her to be a New Zealand ASEAN Scholars Award recipient. I am sure that she will be a postgraduate student whose great talents as engineer in the future.

If you are writing to the teacher who may or may not know you well enough so you may write dear sir and at the yours sincerely

thank you very much, but I think if I add his greatness in recommend me so I have to omit his greatness in the last part, is it true?

... Well, there is no harm in recommending you again. In the last part, you can get him to re-instate his recommendation. For example;

I strongly believe that the proposed Masters program would benefit kikiliyik both personally and professionally. Based on here credentials, skills and ambition, I strongly recommend her as a candidate with lots of potential for this program.

if you don't mind, can you give me an example story that can impress the reader. thank you

EF provides you thousand samples of stories. Go get your own search, dear :D