Hey guys Thank you for reading this! Because of many reasons I've decided to homeschool for my senior year. I apply for a college in United States and a self explaining document for my background is necessary. English, however, is not my first language, thus I hope you can help me look at this. For example I welcome suggestions on the format, sentence structures. And I don't know if this overall is apropriate for the admission office, I've tried to be objective.Thank you very much! I really appreciate it.
Why Distant School
* This examination is here to explain why I choose Forest Trail Academy, a distant private school located in Florida over a private school in a remote area of China.
I believe that I have made the right choice and I'm happy being what I am now. I have given full consideration and anticipation before I left Dlian Maple Leaf International School.
A. I evaluated the value of both institutions.
Objectively, Dalian Maple Leaf International School is one of the most prestigious highschool in mainland China. It is one of the first international school collaborating with a North American Country in China.
However, this school now has a population of 800 per grade, which makes it more like a public school.
Forest Trail Academy is also an awarded and accredited distant private school. However,I did not knew about it untill 2009.
My parents are both teachers of one of the best University, Shandong University- Weihai Campus. We live on the campus.
I have been attending University symposiums before high school.
B. I knew that I am qualified for college level work if only I can master the work of high school.
In my two years of study in DMLIS, I have achieved the entrance of Zhouenlai Class, AKA the only honor class in the entire school.
I have also achieve the entrance of the International Class which was a chance of attending an accelerated class for students whose native language is English. My entrance was an exception because English was not my first language.
*Less than 10 people have ever achieved of being admitted into both classes.
C.
A year of tuition fee in DMLIS costs approximately 46,000 RMB where Forest Trail Academy costs less than 17,000 RMB.
I understand that my parents have sacrificed a lot both financially and emotionally sending me to an expensive distant boarding school. I also understand that to save some money now can help reduce the huge pressure of my family and gain a better entrance opportunity to any college with a need-based financial aid plan.
Looking forward to participating in a more rigorous class which is cheaper and doing college level work for free, I finally decided to leave the international school.
D.Safety Concerns
Health concern was a problem for many students of my previous institution, Dalian Maple Leaf International School, a boarding school in a remote area of rural China.
In 2009, DMLIS has officially divided itself into two campuses (boys' and girls'), which was something the school has never done before. To me it means that there is no experience generated guarantee in the follwing year's education. Because it has a history of not telling the junior grade students' parents that the junior grade is not co-ed anymore until the school day begins last year, I figured that the decision of the official split is not a good one either.
*The following comes as an aftermath but also a proof of my correct anticipation.
These facts has been reported to "315" , a Chinese official Consumer Protection Compliant institution by a student's family:1, On the second day of the school year 2009-2010, the girl's campus had a big fire due to the poor construction. 2, In the newly built girl's campus there is still construcion emission remaining. Several students were poisoned but were told by the school not to release this information. A student who knew this asked a lawyer to post this information on "315" website via legal procedure.
Above considerations explain why I chose distant school.
Luby Meng
Why Distant School
* This examination is here to explain why I choose Forest Trail Academy, a distant private school located in Florida over a private school in a remote area of China.
I believe that I have made the right choice and I'm happy being what I am now. I have given full consideration and anticipation before I left Dlian Maple Leaf International School.
A. I evaluated the value of both institutions.
Objectively, Dalian Maple Leaf International School is one of the most prestigious highschool in mainland China. It is one of the first international school collaborating with a North American Country in China.
However, this school now has a population of 800 per grade, which makes it more like a public school.
Forest Trail Academy is also an awarded and accredited distant private school. However,I did not knew about it untill 2009.
My parents are both teachers of one of the best University, Shandong University- Weihai Campus. We live on the campus.
I have been attending University symposiums before high school.
B. I knew that I am qualified for college level work if only I can master the work of high school.
In my two years of study in DMLIS, I have achieved the entrance of Zhouenlai Class, AKA the only honor class in the entire school.
I have also achieve the entrance of the International Class which was a chance of attending an accelerated class for students whose native language is English. My entrance was an exception because English was not my first language.
*Less than 10 people have ever achieved of being admitted into both classes.
C.
A year of tuition fee in DMLIS costs approximately 46,000 RMB where Forest Trail Academy costs less than 17,000 RMB.
I understand that my parents have sacrificed a lot both financially and emotionally sending me to an expensive distant boarding school. I also understand that to save some money now can help reduce the huge pressure of my family and gain a better entrance opportunity to any college with a need-based financial aid plan.
Looking forward to participating in a more rigorous class which is cheaper and doing college level work for free, I finally decided to leave the international school.
D.Safety Concerns
Health concern was a problem for many students of my previous institution, Dalian Maple Leaf International School, a boarding school in a remote area of rural China.
In 2009, DMLIS has officially divided itself into two campuses (boys' and girls'), which was something the school has never done before. To me it means that there is no experience generated guarantee in the follwing year's education. Because it has a history of not telling the junior grade students' parents that the junior grade is not co-ed anymore until the school day begins last year, I figured that the decision of the official split is not a good one either.
*The following comes as an aftermath but also a proof of my correct anticipation.
These facts has been reported to "315" , a Chinese official Consumer Protection Compliant institution by a student's family:1, On the second day of the school year 2009-2010, the girl's campus had a big fire due to the poor construction. 2, In the newly built girl's campus there is still construcion emission remaining. Several students were poisoned but were told by the school not to release this information. A student who knew this asked a lawyer to post this information on "315" website via legal procedure.
Above considerations explain why I chose distant school.
Luby Meng