Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1

You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.

Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.

You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Mr. Moore

I am writing to apply your advertisement on your website for a waiter position and I will provide my relevant working experience.

I am currently a university student and am going to university during the day time. Therefore I am suitable for this job and very keen to apply in this position and I do have experience in food and beverage. The previous restaurant I worked call TOP ONE which is a Chinese restaurant locate at Brisbane's CBD. My mainly experiences in cashier assistant, dish Deliverer and administrative, also I have been working in this restaurant for eight months and because I went to overseas in my university term break for three months so they hire someone else on my position. I will be able to provide my previous manager reference detail on my CV.

My suitable working time is on Wednesday to Sunday from 4 P.M to 11 P.M and I might only working for two nights a week during exam period on June. If this schedule is not suitable in your restaurant, we could talk about it in interview.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully

Peter wong

you have made many grammer mistakes.please read out the following sentences carefully for undestanding .

I am writing on behalf of your advertisemeant related to post of a waiter on your website.
I am going to unicersity________________________( in this way the sentence will have a more sense and it will also be grammmatically correct.)
Beverages.
The previous restaurant in which i have ___________
I WAS working in this restaurant for _______to overseas DURING MY TERM BREAK________
lookin forward FOR hearing____
You need to learn about tense ,prepositions,and use of during and also make sure that sentence make a complete sense.

Hi friend... your essay on application as a waiter reminded me when I applied for a job as a waiter too,
I am not a native English person, but I would like to give suggestion and recheck of what Raj44 corrected your essay. I just want to see this only: looking forward to hearing from you soon..blabla. based on my experience and my English lecturer said that: after looking forward , the word is to not for.

I dont know what the exactly reason is, but I found it everywhere is like that.
any ideas on i..just free feel to comment ok
thank you

Good luck friend