Write an email to your English friend. In your email, tell your friend about your favourite film

the psychological movie

Dear Quynh,

I have made the most of summer vacation before I start my new school year at the beginning of September. At this time I have watched a large number of films but " về nhà đi con" is my favorite TV movie. This film belongs to a psychology genre with simple content turns around family, friends, and love. This movie attracts people from the old to the young to jocular and up-to-date dialogues. In addition, this film also brings audiences about spiritual family sentiment. I think you will be fond of this movie if you watch it.

The first sentence , especially the " spend the most of summer vacation " part , nearly makes no senser and even eradicates the mean of an opening email . " Về nhà đi con " ,actually, isNOT A TELEVISION movie . The word " belong " doesnt go well with the sentence . There's so much to talk about this essay . However , nice try , I appreciate your effort

@emme4665
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@Maria
Thank you for your comment. This writing is limited by 90 words so actually, I don't know how to explain the film's content. I'm a new member, hope to get much help from you as well as others