Hi I have to do a Classification paragraph on Types of Cruiser Motorcycles using two supports frame style and suspension, 10 to 12 sentences in length for my writing workshop. I am hoping that you can look it over and give me any suggestions as well as check my punctuation not to sure if what i am doing is right or not so feedback would be great thanks.
Cruiser style motorcycles can be classified into three categories: Softails, Hardtails(Rigid), and Customs. Softails are built using a two part frame with a pivot point allowing active suspension to be mounted to the rear wheel via a swingarm. This allows for a smooth comfortable ride. Hardtails(Rigid) are built using a solid one piece frame, therefore mounting the rear tire axle directly to the frame with no suspension. This means more road feel and a rough ride. Customs are built with frames that are streached and/or widened and will or will not have a form of suspension depending on the builders vision. These bikes are built to satisfy the customers riding comfort.
Cruiser style motorcycles can be classified into three categories: Softails, Hardtails(Rigid), and Customs. Softails are built using a two part frame with a pivot point allowing active suspension to be mounted to the rear wheel via a swingarm. This allows for a smooth comfortable ride. Hardtails(Rigid) are built using a solid one piece frame, therefore mounting the rear tire axle directly to the frame with no suspension. This means more road feel and a rough ride. Customs are built with frames that are streached and/or widened and will or will not have a form of suspension depending on the builders vision. These bikes are built to satisfy the customers riding comfort.