My working experience in a company
All information presented here will be fact-checked so make sure the data is valid. The name of the company and mostrecent position title in relation to the masters course choices mustbe mentioned.
I have obtained an academic background in Fashion Design
There are several majors related to fashion design. Name the university, year of graduation, and specific fashion design major.
Do not enumerate the course objectives alone. Avoid the use of general study objectives. Tie the choices, both course and university with:
1. Relevant undergraduate courses that prepared one to take this course.
2. Professional experience in relation to the masters degree.
3. Future career goals that the subject prepares the applicant to undertake.
Additionally, mentioning if an early acceptance / invitation has been recieved could help the reviewers better assess the qualifications, study plan, and objectives of the student.
The current presentation has a wrong discussion focus. A properly guided content revision will help redirect the essay towards the necessary information presentation.