Why I chose the following Master's programs and institutions

master in melbourne, australia

I decided to study in Australia because it offers a wide variety of master's program in media and communication. Among the cities, I chose Melbourne because I need to connect with people from different backgrounds in order to grow both as a media professional and an individual. Melbourne can provide me the chance with its culturally diverse environment.

My first choice is Master of Communication, RMIT. This program offers courses that will help me learn how to apply communication strategies in various settings, including multicultural environment, which is vital as my job involves bridging communication between groups of different cultures, especially Indonesia and Japan. I am also interested in RMIT's work integrated learning approach which is incorporated as one of the core courses in the program. I believe it will help me develop knowledge and skills necessary for my goal to provide job opportunities for other media professionals. It also has courses (COMM2761 and COMM2083) which will help me learn how to communicate changes for media literate society.

My second choice is Master of Global Media Communication, Melbourne University. It offers a course that combines the study of how to use media as a tool in communication with analyzing media within a multicultural context. Core course MECM40003 is essential for me to learn how to understand media audience. Courses CULS40001 and MECM90002 will help me understand how to operate in global media industry, while MECM90003 and MECM40007 helps me understand the condition of global society and media to work on building a media literate society.

Katya, You can remove the first paragraph because that discussion focuses on the reasons that you chose to study in Melbourne, Australia. The topic instructions indicates that you should only discuss the reason why you chose specific universities and courses offered in the same country. Why you chose to study in that country does not factor into the discussion and should therefore be removed. Since this is a word count specific essay, try to get to the point as soon as you can so that the reviewer's attention will immediately be drawn to your response instead of an unrelated response at the start. Use the word count solely for developing your discussion of the course program and institutional choices. Your first paragraph is a prompt redirection which will not be appreciated by the reviewer because of the limited time that he has to read each applicant's essay. Presenting only the required discussion will help your application more in this instance.

@kacanakya
try answering the following questions in your essay:
What is your college major? If you are a high school student, explain why you desire to study in in the XXX university and?
What advances in this field have occurred in the XXX university that inspired you to study there?
What do you hope to achieve through your studies in the XXX University?
Why did you choose to attend (university name)?
What kind of social development do you hope to have during this experience?What kind of personality and character traits can you offer your friends, and classmates during your experience in the XXX university?