i want to be an economic expert--> for my Korean Scholarship (KGSP)

hi everyone, help me to make a good and intersesting essay for my korean sholarship aplications form
i waiting for your command
thanks a lot...

Goal of study & Study Plan: Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan

I want be expertise in economics, this is the main goal of my master study. Living in Indonesia became the pride of its own for me. Indonesia have many natural resources that have high value for export. But in many conditions, Indonesia was not able to get value-added in exports. I think this really have impact on the trade balance sheet of Indonesia. Beside that, the free float exchange rate system is effect to export profit. So, we must control that exchange rate of movement and, the effect to trade balance sheet. That's is my reason for my research study.

Refer to trade balance sheet of Indonesia, my research also have impact for Korea. Indonesia and Korea have a good bilateral relations. So I wish my research also useful for Korea economy in the future.

Title or subject research : "J-curve effect : exchange rate and trade balance sheet of Indonesia"
My detail study plan:
My research as a purposed relationship between rupiah's exchange rate and Indonesia trade balance sheet. I will use data about 2000:1-present. I will get the data from The Central Bank of Indonesia (website), and other institutions that have relations, such as Indonesia Statistics, Ministry of Trade, and the other. The model to analysis, I will use Co-integration Analysis method and Error Correction Model (ECM). This analysis focus in short run and long run effect to find the J-curve phenomenon. I wish the result of my research applicable to Indonesia. Relevant to policy making for improve Indonesia trade balance and prohibit the bad probability of Indonesia exchange rate. Also I wish this research useful for other country as reference and consideration policy.

Future Plan after Study: Future plan in Korea or another country after study in Korea

I wish my study be useful for both Korea and Indonesia. The important ones is I could apply the result of my study in Korea to Indonesia (my home country). I will dedicate my graduations for my home country. After my study in Korea I will back to my country for apply my learning outcomes. I want be expertise in economics, and useful for my country. One of my dream after graduate from Korea, I will be a lecture in my home country to share my experience study in Korea with Indonesian Student. I have value-added if graduated from Korea to be lecture in Indonesia. I will make this scholarship as a bridge to get future scholarship in the next level of my study. I wish to be easy to get doctoral scholarship after finish KGSP master degree. Beside that, I am very grateful to Korean Government, I want be a good partner for them. I wish Korea and Indonesia always have good bilateral relations, and I always full support of that.

....well what you have written has a grammar issue. You can say it;
I want be an expert in economics OR I want to develop my expertise in economics.
This is my suggestion;
My goal is to pursue a masters program in economics major, the discipline in which I wish to gain my expertise.


... this really does not fit in here. How living in Indonesia and being proud about it helps your masters? You need this sentence to set up a link with your previous and next lines.



... Present this as a general fact and not as one of your opinions.