Hai everyone, needs some feedback on my essay for scholarship.
is it good enough to qualify the scholarship?
What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your proposed study?
If I got selected to become an awardee of the New Zealand Scholarship, I specifically hope to acquire knowledge related to food science in New Zealand. As we know that New Zealand main source of income comes from agriculture, especially meat and dairy products. It is a good opportunity for me to experience the food industry processes from farm to consumer's table, and how New Zealand's food scientist ensuring the safety and quality of the product, from basic knowledge of food safety to the advance and high-tech knowledge of food safety. Also, gain an understanding of keeping all the processes happen according to the requirements and regulations.
In term of the skills, I feel that I need to develop my skill in food safety and quality because not only it is one of the major things need to be developed in Indonesia but it also an important aspect for everyone to get a safe and high-quality meal to be consumed. Since I have a dream to be a food safety researcher, it will be a good opportunity to have quality control analysis skills such as conducting tests and inspections of products or processes to evaluate the quality and safety of the products. Another skill I would like to have is an understanding of the implications of new information for both current and future problem-solving and decision-making so it still meets the standardize requirements and regulation of food safety.1 essay at a time