Hello, I'm applying for KGSP: graduate school and I would like to ask for suggestions to strengthen my essay for my future plan.
Thank you and I will appreciate all the feedback.
Once I graduated, I will go back to the Philippines and will work in my chosen field. I would like to acquire a position in an organization or company under the human resource department that will allow me to apply all the knowledge and training I have gained in Korea. I would like to make a comprehensive program about training and development to align personnel and train employees and build their competencies. I will be efficient and effective to the company to help them create a friendly and people oriented organization.
After I practice my degree in the Philippines I still want to broaden my experience and to be seasoned in my chosen field. I also have plans to work and practice my profession in Korea as I was granted a scholarship program. I would like to work in a organization where I can contribute all the knowledge I've learned at the university. I believe staying in Korea will provide me the career growth and professional growth that I am looking for. But I also have a dream to be lecturer on the field I have chosen because this will let me train and inspire more people through my work and life experiences.
As I plan to work in Korea and I am very much interested to their culture and tradition, I also want to actively participate in promoting Korean Culture to everyone and as Filipino to promote friendship. Being multilingual, I would also like to teach Koreans with my language skills. This is to show my appreciation and gratitude for the opportunity that given me.
Thank you and I will appreciate all the feedback.
career and professional growth in Korea
Once I graduated, I will go back to the Philippines and will work in my chosen field. I would like to acquire a position in an organization or company under the human resource department that will allow me to apply all the knowledge and training I have gained in Korea. I would like to make a comprehensive program about training and development to align personnel and train employees and build their competencies. I will be efficient and effective to the company to help them create a friendly and people oriented organization.
After I practice my degree in the Philippines I still want to broaden my experience and to be seasoned in my chosen field. I also have plans to work and practice my profession in Korea as I was granted a scholarship program. I would like to work in a organization where I can contribute all the knowledge I've learned at the university. I believe staying in Korea will provide me the career growth and professional growth that I am looking for. But I also have a dream to be lecturer on the field I have chosen because this will let me train and inspire more people through my work and life experiences.
As I plan to work in Korea and I am very much interested to their culture and tradition, I also want to actively participate in promoting Korean Culture to everyone and as Filipino to promote friendship. Being multilingual, I would also like to teach Koreans with my language skills. This is to show my appreciation and gratitude for the opportunity that given me.
