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Essay on leadership and influencers, explaining how i meet these requirements.



vincent117 1 / -  
Oct 1, 2017   #1

leadership in fight against poverty



Leadership is not a position of which one is elected, appointed or enthroned, it is a task or a choice one has to take to serve. to do this constantly and in a successful manner, it entails that one must positively influence, empower and motivate individuals, having them fully understand their uniqueness, spirits, qualities, limitations,fears and desires.''we are here to put a dent on the universe, otherwise why else even be here?'' Steve Jobs.

Citizens around the world especially developing countries like Nigeria are not well empowered educationally, therefore the potential for unrest and poverty is elevated. This reality can reflect on various aspects such as ability to feed, access to adequate health care, influence on social status and immediate environment and other aspects of redistributive justice.

In the past years I have volunteered to go to the field and make an impact on the health of individuals who has little or no access to health care, clothing, feeding and adequate education as the case may be. as a health practitioner,i am tasked with the health of individuals around me. Each year for the past four(4) years, I have volunteered to facilitate the sensitization of individuals on psychiatry, a program that makes a positive impact on how individuals with mental illness are stigmatized as being possessed by demonic spirits, i have also volunteered for polio vaccination programs at a local private medical provider that has saved thousands of lives.

Regarding my course of choice for this scholarship (public health) My goal is reaching out to those in the most impoverished regions of the country, if and when successful, this will help create opportunities for members of these communities to develop personal skills for their survival. Reorienting the health care system through policy implementation to strengthen primary health care and also encourage community health will also be a goal to achieve.

In conclusion poverty is the worse form of violence and to defeat poverty, it is important to provide interventions that will enable sustainable development. it is also important to evaluate the outcomes of these interventions as a measure of how much these set goals can be achieved.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15467  
Oct 1, 2017   #2
Vincent, is this for the Chevening Scholarship? If it is, then let me tell you right off the bat that if you pass this essay to the reviewer, he is going to reject your application. You are only talking of an idea of leadership in this essay. Your narration does not show how you embody the role of leadership in your profession. There is no clear example of your leadership and influencing skills in the right context as being a simple volunteer does not count as a professional experience. You are not mentioning anything regarding a leadership role that you portrayed. The prompt demands that you showcase your leadership skills within your line of work because that ties in directly to the other essay prompts that you are going to be writing. Read the leadership and influencing examples here. Figure out how you can prove your professional leadership skills in a similar vein. The quote about Steve Jobs doesn't help your essay at all because he is speaking of his idea of leadership but it doesn't translate into something that relates to your professional experience. Therefore, the quote doesn't help your essay along and should not be used in this essay. This is not the kind of leadership and influencing essay that will have the reviewer thinking that you could actually be some sort of professional leader in your country. The essay that you wrote doesn't represent the correct prompt requirements.


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