Limited Resources/ Lack of funds; LETTER OF INTENT

It is very rare to find the right opportunity in one's life, so I'm happy that I finally got the opportunity to apply for Erasmus Munds mathematical modeling Scholarship. I'm a graduate of Tishreen University holding a very good degree in Electrical Engineering.

I fell that a master course in mathematical modeling in engineering will be very important cause it shows engineers why it is useful to deal with when solving real-life technical problems. Reading the aim of the program especially the part that describe the use of the mathematics and related computational tools to bring real-world, challenging and important socio-economic and industrial problems into a form simple enough so that a good solution can be found in a reasonable time, I realized that kind of science is what we really need in this critical time in my country Syria.After finishing your MSC program I would be able to have a useful role in the cycle of our country Reconstruction by assumes that resources of time, imagination, and money can be invested with confidence .

I'd like to work with research based groups in this field of study with an aim to enhance research and human resources capacity through this scholarship and it will provide a cumulative skill base to analyze data and understand the impact of variation on real-world decisions.This practical master will prepare me as a student for employment in a wide variety of business, industry and government settings and above all this program will allow me as an engineer to experience the sheer joy of formulating and solving mathematical problems

Because of a limited resources and due to the lack of the necessary funds, I'd not be able to join your program without your scholarship.

I'd be very grateful to be provided with this scholarship cause I had numerous opportunities to do many activities, In addition the scholarship will give me the perfect chance to interact with students from several professions and different cultures from all over the world.

I will take advantage of this scholarship to garner a wealth of ideas that I will apply when t return to my country and on the other hand to contribute improving my country and my university.

Considering all the previous factors, I believe that the chosen study will benefit my country in general.
Finally I consider myself to be a good candidate for Erasmus Munds scholarship because I'm energetic, hardworking, visionary and motivated person who believes that i can do something for the benefit of my country .

looking forward to hear from the MathMods Evaluation Committee.

Maybe you should add an idea about what are you going to do if this scholarship is offered to you. Something more practical.

Good luck!

thx Veronica i'll do what u said and u can tell me then if its good enough.

seeky
Reading the aim of the program especially the part that describes the use of the mathematics and related computational tools to bring real-world, challenging as well as important socio-economic and industrial problems into a form simple enough so that a good solution can be found in a reasonable time, I realized that it is the kind of science that we really need in this critical time in my country Syria...who does WE refer to.

rephrase it like: I realized that it is the kind of science that my country Syria needs at this critical juncture.

Here WE doesnt not have a preceding noun to which it refers.Syria comes at the end of the sentence.A pronoun like WE should have a preceding noun.